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Her Last Words
The wrinkled furrows of her brow
said climax has arrived.
I saw the thrill of ecstasy
behind her tear-filled eyes.
“Please leave the windows open
to let our spirits fly.”
The last words that she said to me
before her young flesh died.
said climax has arrived.
I saw the thrill of ecstasy
behind her tear-filled eyes.
“Please leave the windows open
to let our spirits fly.”
The last words that she said to me
before her young flesh died.
Published 10th May 2021
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10th May 2021 8:57pm
Oh my poet.. you had me at hello with the picture. You always seem to find the perfect picture to complement your beautiful musings, very nice
10th May 2021 10:17pm
Thank you for your kindness. Sometimes the image prompts the words. Sometimes I go looking for an image which can be fun, too.
11th May 2021 00:31am
Anonymous
- Edited 2nd Apr 2022 3:45am
10th May 2021 9:15pm
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10th May 2021 10:14pm
I like your careful reading. I was thinking physical death by unknown means. Death of innocence is a nice interpretation, too.
Anonymous
- Edited 2nd Apr 2022 3:45am
10th May 2021 11:19pm
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