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Dating
Been lost in our game
where I hide behind
Avatars
Dizzying, paralyzing,
scared, and
undone.
You’ve ♥️
me three times, though
offline you’re more
off me;
chasing
The ‘nines’
not the
one.
where I hide behind
Avatars
Dizzying, paralyzing,
scared, and
undone.
You’ve ♥️
me three times, though
offline you’re more
off me;
chasing
The ‘nines’
not the
one.
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Re: Re. Dating
9th May 2021 1:10pm
@Ljdynamic thank you, you're so sweet! happy to say this one is not about me but super hard to watch it happen to amazing people that deserve way more. sending love, ursa
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Re. Dating
9th May 2021 1:59pm
Excellent description of the challenges of online relationships. Loved the number play. We men are often guilty of chasing the nines...
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Re: Re. Dating
9th May 2021 3:46pm
@LostViking I think we are all guilty for chasing the nines, or what resembles one anyway.. thanks for reading. I appreciate you, ursa.
Re. Dating
9th May 2021 3:41pm
Dang! This is heartbreakingly true. I must be bad at arithmetic, though.
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Re: Re. Dating
9th May 2021 3:45pm
@Penguinephile the hearts don't count for much in the end. Thanks for reading, and your comment. Hope you're having a good day. :) ursa
Re: Re. Dating
9th May 2021 3:48pm
I slightly disagree. Maybe, I am naive but heart does count in the end for some. But, it is the beginning in which the heart doesn't count.
I enjoyed reading it, compelling as it was. Perfectly structured and ended.
I enjoyed reading it, compelling as it was. Perfectly structured and ended.
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Re: Re. Dating
9th May 2021 6:08pm
thank you for disagreeing. It allows me to process more; I appreciate you. thank you for your comments. :)
Re. Dating
15th May 2021 12:31pm
Dear U,
About time someone calls this out. I’ve seen many suffer such a disappointing and often devastating end in just such a fashion. It’s so sad for those who’ve been treated so poorly and so cowardly by those who think they can get away with exhibiting such thoughtless regard just because they can hide behind a screen. Well written. H🌷
About time someone calls this out. I’ve seen many suffer such a disappointing and often devastating end in just such a fashion. It’s so sad for those who’ve been treated so poorly and so cowardly by those who think they can get away with exhibiting such thoughtless regard just because they can hide behind a screen. Well written. H🌷
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Re: Re. Dating
15th May 2021 1:37pm
@Honoria, thank you, dear friend, for your comment. so true, it is far too easy to relinquish responsibility without our faces or names attached to our actions. We forget our human side like it's optional; time to learn that we are who we are, whether someone is watching or not!