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Senryu - Triptych: Going Absolutely Bananas

Green hands in tiers bunched
curved fingers reaching Sunward
tropic chandelier

Split, blended, or sliced
for sweet delights sacrificed
savor joy's flavor

By mere brown spots shunned
when spotted, sweet flavor peaks
prize the fruit not peel
Gahddess_Worship
Written by Gahddess_Worship
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Author's Note
Waxing versicular about the yellow super fruit. My kids will not touch a banana with brown spots...hey more for me.
The last Haiku I thought a good metaphor for the way the aged are treated with...
Waxing versicular about the yellow super fruit. My kids will not touch a banana with brown spots...hey more for me.
The last Haiku I thought a good metaphor for the way the aged are treated with additional inspiration from Bluevelvete's stirring piece "the grisly misfortune of the way the world works." (https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/418492-the-grisly-misfortune-of-the-way-the/)
Okay, now I'm craving banana pudding topped with vanilla wafers, or banana bread, we use the black ones for that.
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