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Shift For Me
Do you feel my watchful gaze
fall upon you
in subliminal touches?
Observation baits the appetite
as this exhibitionism expands
in purpose and in pant.
If I conquer you,
it takes away that thrill
that you might shift for me
Seated, alone
unoccupied by nothing
but that culling sensation
Invading the mundane,
a slight dampness
forming from the want
Of that trailing finger,
or that hungry mouth
or that initial feeling of a tip
Pressing into the arousal,
united by the skin
from the seduction of our minds.
fall upon you
in subliminal touches?
Observation baits the appetite
as this exhibitionism expands
in purpose and in pant.
If I conquer you,
it takes away that thrill
that you might shift for me
Seated, alone
unoccupied by nothing
but that culling sensation
Invading the mundane,
a slight dampness
forming from the want
Of that trailing finger,
or that hungry mouth
or that initial feeling of a tip
Pressing into the arousal,
united by the skin
from the seduction of our minds.
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Re. Shift For Me
6th May 2021 2:12am
I have not graced the beautiful calling of your canvass in quite a while, I feel like a virgin whispering behind a poetic serenade.. Maybe I should have brought honey at least you could had dabbed some on my soft lips, kissed me, and then said, hello... and it appears you have not lost your poetic touch.. enjoy your evening my one and only tender poet😘
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Re: Re. Shift For Me
6th May 2021 2:23am
My canvas has been rather blank for some time. And it is truly crazy how fast it can really go if we do not find ways to slow it down. I knew there was a missing ingredient. Thank you for gracing this piece with your eager attention and enticing commentary. A wonderful evening to you on the conclusion of this "hump" day.
Re: Re. Shift For Me
6th May 2021 2:39am
Mm.. is the only words that comes to mind... and my lips are sticking to that soft receptive sentiment.. who needs honey with that magnetic enticement, and welcome back to DUP after a meaningful sabbatical, us poetesses have missed that Canadian poetic hospitality .. and a certain woman in a red dress, everything else.. on that purring note.. enjoy your evening my tender poet
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Re. Shift For Me
6th May 2021 1:40pm
Pleasure to find ur page, dear poet.. This is a soft flood all the way thru..
"If I conquer you,
it takes away that thrill
that you might shift for me" <~~ purrfect erotica, that!!
Attention to the small details- a must- and u manage to exploit "that shift" in a most carnal classy way. did i mention sexy? i meant to. ;)
hott writing.. definitely an RL for me.
shinee wishes to ur day,
~d
"If I conquer you,
it takes away that thrill
that you might shift for me" <~~ purrfect erotica, that!!
Attention to the small details- a must- and u manage to exploit "that shift" in a most carnal classy way. did i mention sexy? i meant to. ;)
hott writing.. definitely an RL for me.
shinee wishes to ur day,
~d
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Re: Re. Shift For Me
6th May 2021 1:57pm
I appreciate the visit. Happy to induce such sentiments. And thank you for the RL add.
Re. Shift For Me
6th May 2021 1:57pm
A great piece creating an immediate UP. Great write. Hugs and peace, oral
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Re. Shift For Me
6th May 2021 2:45pm
stunning write, as always, these stanzas are delectable
"Invading the mundane,
a slight dampness
forming from the want
Of that trailing finger,
or that hungry mouth
or that initial feeling of a tip "
"Invading the mundane,
a slight dampness
forming from the want
Of that trailing finger,
or that hungry mouth
or that initial feeling of a tip "
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6th May 2021 3:41pm
Re. Shift For Me
6th May 2021 8:30pm
"Invading the mundane" ... love that ... au revoir ennui ... nicely poeted ...
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