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first and only love

the love story I love to tell
that amazing night in my memory delights
those feelings first found being introduced
you stirred something deep

the love story I love to tell
it's usually the girl who likes to tell
you don't find the value
in the treasure trove as I

the love story I love to tell
that first kiss, like no kiss ever before
the first time I took your hand electrifying
that first dance in perfect step

the love story I love to tell
you ask me to write of something else
it was perfect that night, that why I write
my favorite story is meeting you that night
 
there's another love story to tell
the story you want me to tell
it's your story to write
about when your love come to light



I have written that story so many time
that light in you, the passion in your lips
how you save your hearts first love
I am only guessing about your feelings

I know it's so by the nods you give
sometime you shed a tear
or a “I love you” at what I read
it's your story that I try to tell

you say you don't write
when you said it
those feeling wasn't there
I think you can now
and I will tell you why

that first night was quit special
because I treated you respectfully
it wasn't I didn't have the desire
that's the way you should have been treated

that night I fell in love
you loved me that night
for the respect I showed
that end was what I intended  

to give you the time
to make up  your mind
if I was the right guy
what a surprise

I am still telling that love story
you know the one that brought us
to where we are to night
that has given you the heart to write
4Her411
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