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Dazzling

trickling and moving
over the ground
splashing and crashing
while tumbling down

through the dark forest's
tree covered hills
over moss laden boulders
where water now spills

sparkling and glistening
in the sunlight
shining down from above
so that it might

rebound reflecting back
into the sky
celestially dazzling
to every eye

with spectral visions
of rainbows in mist
rising above the stream
as it is kissed

by the electricity
from one of two stars
this world is not the Earth
this world is not Mars

Luhman 16 the suns
on a planet unnamed
on a day when clouds have cleared
after it rained
bcpoet
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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Author's Note
Luhman 16 is the 3rd closest star system to the Sun...about 6.5 light years...a binary brown dwarf system only discovered in 2013...Best Listened to (with headphones)
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