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Dreams At Ease
Perhaps I should go to sleep
I don`t really want to, though
Maybe you could meet me in my dreams
Where only we could go
We can hold hands and touch
Practically do anything we please
We will have no worries
As we sit and watch the trees
The wind will blow softly
And yet so perfectly
We can relax and watch
The wind blow all the surrounding purple pea
But this is only in my dreams
It what I truly desire
Because my love for you
It the hottest burning fire
I don`t really want to, though
Maybe you could meet me in my dreams
Where only we could go
We can hold hands and touch
Practically do anything we please
We will have no worries
As we sit and watch the trees
The wind will blow softly
And yet so perfectly
We can relax and watch
The wind blow all the surrounding purple pea
But this is only in my dreams
It what I truly desire
Because my love for you
It the hottest burning fire
Published 17th Feb 2012
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17th Feb 2012 5:58pm
soft feeling in here! your name and title in the writing is redundant and comes across juvenile. we,we,we,we,we,we,we,... find other ways to refer to your subject(s). was almost too much to hear the message. still good tho
17th Feb 2012 6:20pm
Im sorry.
Paranoid I suppose.
I feel like if it's not up, people will steal my work.
Paranoid I suppose.
I feel like if it's not up, people will steal my work.
22nd Feb 2012 1:43pm
I like love poems.
You write really well.
I hope that you should not get too many disappointments.
You must be a sweet person. I think.
Good job ;)
You write really well.
I hope that you should not get too many disappointments.
You must be a sweet person. I think.
Good job ;)
22nd Feb 2012 8:58pm
