This room is pitch black

Wow @ the imagery here, Samael. I could feel the tingling of awakening sleep in my fingers at your spiders. As if mornings couldn't be hell enough for some, you realize that it's still nighttime. . .and you're in the dark.

I really adore the language used and the quirky word construction (I sometimes dabble doing that)  To me it adds a flavor and uniqueness; setting apart and adding to that nightmarish feel that this piece so cleverly emotes. Your dark imagery is fresh and honestly, unparalleled. I really really like reading dark poetry and have read A LOT, here on DU, yours really made me perk up my feelers. Truly inspired. Some really wonderful stuff that begins with the killer opening and nails it with that poetic brilliance of a perfect lined 'happy ending'....

I can feel your palpable pain and ache through and through, and I'm so appreciative of the journey you bravely take us on.

Thank you, kind sir, for finding me, so I could find you, too.

Warmest regards,
🌹  
-B

I like the way you segment this piece, applying provocative and powerful imagery in each segment, giving a feeling of movement within the dark silence and stillness of the underlying experience, culminating in most macabre finality.  

Excellent!