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a kryptonite of flesh.
a thunder of delicacy
as formidable as it is tender
under my ear
almost to neck
but
not quite
close enough
to distinctly hear—
every.
single.
breath.
taken.
which is done
intentionally,
of course
as that spot
is where
all my willpower
goes to die
a
slow
glorious
death.
that spot,
of my most sensitive flesh
wired by nerves
directly connected
to my innermost core
the sanctum
of all
that is
welcomed torture
and where
unmitigated
willing abandon,
gladly
awaits to be tapped,
forgetting
anything and all
only to say
YES
to everything.
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 23rd Apr 2021
| Edited 10th Jun 2022
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Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
23rd Apr 2021 00:51am
Ooooh a little neck and lobe nibbling lol
Kissing and whispering soft sensual phrases in the night
Great write beautiful
Love and light
RON XX
Kissing and whispering soft sensual phrases in the night
Great write beautiful
Love and light
RON XX
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Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
23rd Apr 2021 00:53am
Now you know my Achilles heel! 😉
Sweet Dreams, my bravest knight.
✨ 💫 ✨
Sending good thoughts and hopes of pleasant dreams all night long... 🧚🏻♀️
🌹
x
Sweet Dreams, my bravest knight.
✨ 💫 ✨
Sending good thoughts and hopes of pleasant dreams all night long... 🧚🏻♀️
🌹
x
Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
23rd Apr 2021 00:52am
Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
23rd Apr 2021 8:13am
or even a couple... heh heh 😈✨
Thanks for stopping by, k
I'm glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate the comments
🌹
xo
B
Thanks for stopping by, k
I'm glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate the comments
🌹
xo
B
Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
23rd Apr 2021 1:01am
It seems that ever human has that spot, that spot where no's magically becomes yeses. We don't know it this is deja vu but we recently has a conversation very similar to this piece. This seems to be the kryptonite spot of so many, and we must admit that we've cheated and used this spot also. your wording as always is on point and your piece along with the pic is tight as usual.
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Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
That's right, Me... that 'magic button' place... Where no's become yes's. That's the best. lol... I do have this one spot.. plus, a few choice others...
I smile thinking about their locations... 😈.
I thank you for reading and your extremely thoughtful remarks. I'm glad I'm not the only one thinking these things.... hahaha 😂.
I appreciate you, very much 🙏🏻
🌹 - xo
B
I smile thinking about their locations... 😈.
I thank you for reading and your extremely thoughtful remarks. I'm glad I'm not the only one thinking these things.... hahaha 😂.
I appreciate you, very much 🙏🏻
🌹 - xo
B
Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
23rd Apr 2021 1:44am
Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
23rd Apr 2021 8:15am
Mmmm....Very sweet, indeed... it's like a treasure hunt.... ;)
Hee hee...
Ty for the RL add and your lovely thoughts, dearest FeNyX
Much love and returned blessings
🌹-B
xo
Hee hee...
Ty for the RL add and your lovely thoughts, dearest FeNyX
Much love and returned blessings
🌹-B
xo
Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
23rd Apr 2021 4:03am
Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
You got that right, Grace!
Ty for reading and you for perfectly put comments.
I so appreciate you.
🌹
xo
Ty for reading and you for perfectly put comments.
I so appreciate you.
🌹
xo
Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
23rd Apr 2021 5:39am
Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
23rd Apr 2021 8:17am
Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
23rd Apr 2021 7:12am
Holy freaking erotic, enticing, mind teasing soul beautiful blue.
Thank you for letting this grace my eyes and for making them smile.
Good to see you are still here and still killing it as always
Thank you for letting this grace my eyes and for making them smile.
Good to see you are still here and still killing it as always
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Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
Ahhh.. I knew that there was a stronger whiff of yummy dominance in the air here on DU!! .... purrr....lol... So wonderful to see you, Swagger! 🦋
I'm so glad you are back with us! Writing erotica hasn't been the same without you. Yet I'm extraordinarily glad to read you're taking care of yourself, that's first and foremost what's really important. I send out all my best healing and positive juju your way. ✨ 💫 ✨ Hopefully we'll see more of you here and all the yumminess that entails. No worries though, I understand baby steps; so no pressures either. Only my support and a reminder that your tall, dark and dominance is always appreciated here, with me... 🌺🌹🌸🥀
Thank you for reading and the generous list add... My heart pitter patters (perhaps elsewhere, too! )
at your kind words and sentiments.
Welcome back with warmest regards,
🌹 - xo
Blue
.
I'm so glad you are back with us! Writing erotica hasn't been the same without you. Yet I'm extraordinarily glad to read you're taking care of yourself, that's first and foremost what's really important. I send out all my best healing and positive juju your way. ✨ 💫 ✨ Hopefully we'll see more of you here and all the yumminess that entails. No worries though, I understand baby steps; so no pressures either. Only my support and a reminder that your tall, dark and dominance is always appreciated here, with me... 🌺🌹🌸🥀
Thank you for reading and the generous list add... My heart pitter patters (perhaps elsewhere, too! )
at your kind words and sentiments.
Welcome back with warmest regards,
🌹 - xo
Blue
.
Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
23rd Apr 2021 8:30am
Wow ... where to begin ... with the title of course ... then the first line ... sweet reader surrender ... the tease of the first stanza ... the line breaks making it agonizing ecstasy ... underscoring "intentionally" ... perfect ... then there is "that" spot ... I know where mine is ... had me imaging yours ... there there is that matter of a "slow glorious death" ... making me want to ... need to ... join the speaker ... "sanctum" ... a plump juicy word with religious overtones ... the last line is double platinum ... having teased ... drawn things out ... built up the sexual tension ... the close gives me the reader permission to let my imagination roam ... a perfect erotic vignette ... start to finish ...
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Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
Ohhhh my!!! LilD... I might also need a little moment to cool down from these amazing comments.... whew!... 😋 ..... I am humbled- so so humbled, at your feedback... your assessment was like you were sitting next to me as I was writing... The little sexy nuances, my formating and the use of sanctum (which I find incredibly sacrosanct and sooo sex.. hahaha!!..) I think that my forced catholic school girl l self lies just underneath my surface still... lol...Each bullet point of yours, I devour and use to become better with. You are invaluable with your support. I'm so fortunate as well as so grateful. Your thoughtfulness, (our conjoined) love of sensuality, well it makes for one of my best comments that I've received here on DUP.
My heart is full and my pen is ablaze. (amongst other places... lol!)
Much love and tremendous respect,
🌹
xo
-B
My heart is full and my pen is ablaze. (amongst other places... lol!)
Much love and tremendous respect,
🌹
xo
-B
Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
23rd Apr 2021 3:15pm
It's very true, twas the deepest part of Blue. ;)
I'm very glad you enjoyed reading, my friend. Thank you for visiting and sharing your thoughts.
🌹
B
-x
I'm very glad you enjoyed reading, my friend. Thank you for visiting and sharing your thoughts.
🌹
B
-x
Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
23rd Apr 2021 12:25pm
That spot where all my willpower goes to die a slow glorious death. Thank you for that beautiful image! Also found myself lingering on the words that "inner most core" and "sanctum." Felt changes in my body as I read this! What fun!
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Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
23rd Apr 2021 3:12pm
That's truly wonderful to read, LV..... as I also felt changes, deep within myself, while writing.... ;)
I thank you for reading and for leaving your thoughts with me. I'm all smiles that you enjoyed imagining...
because I certainly enjoy conjuring!
Lovely regards,
🌹 - x
-B
I thank you for reading and for leaving your thoughts with me. I'm all smiles that you enjoyed imagining...
because I certainly enjoy conjuring!
Lovely regards,
🌹 - x
-B
Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
23rd Apr 2021 3:26pm
Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
23rd Apr 2021 3:36pm
A returned, Mmmm
and - likewise ;)
💙-B
btw, Ty for the generosity of your list add. - 🙏🏻
and - likewise ;)
💙-B
btw, Ty for the generosity of your list add. - 🙏🏻
Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
23rd Apr 2021 4:56pm
Super swamped! i promise in May i will catch up.. I see you mama wonderful ink your crafting!
loves you
Jackie Xo
loves you
Jackie Xo
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Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
24th Apr 2021 2:29am
Loves you back!!!
Ty so much for stopping by, Jackie
I'm so grateful for you, my dear! 🙏🏻
🌹💙🌹
xoxo-
your BB
Ty so much for stopping by, Jackie
I'm so grateful for you, my dear! 🙏🏻
🌹💙🌹
xoxo-
your BB
Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
23rd Apr 2021 4:57pm
This is so delightfully sensual. Love it, and sounds like we have a spot in common. ;-)
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Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
24th Apr 2021 2:27am
I thank you kindly for reading... Ha! Welcome to the club..... ;) It's nice finding people with similar 'interests' innit!?... heh.. 😈
I appreciate you visiting, please don't be a stranger 🙏🏻
Regards,
🌹
xo
-B
I appreciate you visiting, please don't be a stranger 🙏🏻
Regards,
🌹
xo
-B
Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
23rd Apr 2021 5:26pm
Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
23rd Apr 2021 11:01pm
Ahhh. please... dream away, my dear Oral... I do..
Ty for reading, my friend 🙏🏻 ✨
Ty for reading, my friend 🙏🏻 ✨
Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
23rd Apr 2021 11:06pm
Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
23rd Apr 2021 11:53pm
Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
23rd Apr 2021 10:57pm
Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts, I'm very appreciative. Welcome to DUP, I hope you enjoy your time here.
🌹
-B
🌹
-B
Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
23rd Apr 2021 10:58pm
Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
24th Apr 2021 1:54am
Ooohweee.. you are pourin open heat n sensuality here, beautiful B! feels like soft lace dripped in ink on the read.
ever adore your pen, sweet lady.. wishin u an amazin friday♡
~d
ever adore your pen, sweet lady.. wishin u an amazin friday♡
~d
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Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
24th Apr 2021 3:56am
heh... I tried my best to to let heat slowly flow ;)
🔥 🔥
I thank you for reading and your extremely kind remarks, my dear 🙏🏻
It's always so lovely seeing you, 🦋
Best wishes —✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - xo
~B
🔥 🔥
I thank you for reading and your extremely kind remarks, my dear 🙏🏻
It's always so lovely seeing you, 🦋
Best wishes —✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - xo
~B
Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
24th Apr 2021 2:22am
Dear BV,
Jesus B! I’ll have to write you back later. Right now I need a cigarette and then a shower...🚬😉 this is sizzlin’
H🌷
Jesus B! I’ll have to write you back later. Right now I need a cigarette and then a shower...🚬😉 this is sizzlin’
H🌷
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Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
24th Apr 2021 4:29am
You're damn, right! 🔥 🚬
I say, owning my sensuality!! (at least right this moment, anyway!) .. heh, heh.. Seriously, I thank you for reading and your extremely kind RL add, my dear 🙏🏻 I'm appreciative and so grateful for your, err, verklempt-ness... haha.
I do love being a surprise of ... incognito, sexy....
Much love and extra sizzles... lol ♨️
xoxo-B
💙
I say, owning my sensuality!! (at least right this moment, anyway!) .. heh, heh.. Seriously, I thank you for reading and your extremely kind RL add, my dear 🙏🏻 I'm appreciative and so grateful for your, err, verklempt-ness... haha.
I do love being a surprise of ... incognito, sexy....
Much love and extra sizzles... lol ♨️
xoxo-B
💙
Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
Beautiful way with words and getting the moment and feeling out. It's amazing what you can do with words Blu.
Titled beautifully.
Titled beautifully.
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Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
24th Apr 2021 4:29pm
Oh wow, Lj... I really appreciate you reading.
I'm so humbled with thanks. What is amazing is the kindness that accompanies your comments. I'm grateful for that, your generosity of the list add and you taking time out to visit.... love that you liked the title, too... titling is my weirdo thing... thx for mentioning it. 💙
I enjoy your thoughts and insights, very much —You're always welcome here.
🌹
xo
~B
I'm so humbled with thanks. What is amazing is the kindness that accompanies your comments. I'm grateful for that, your generosity of the list add and you taking time out to visit.... love that you liked the title, too... titling is my weirdo thing... thx for mentioning it. 💙
I enjoy your thoughts and insights, very much —You're always welcome here.
🌹
xo
~B
Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
24th Apr 2021 7:38pm
Often within Your puddles
i feel liken to iron filings
attracted to Your magnetic
spills..........
i feel liken to iron filings
attracted to Your magnetic
spills..........
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Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
24th Apr 2021 10:34pm
You're so attune, T
It's that awareness.... for sure.
I thank you for reading and leaving your heated thoughts, my friend 🙏🏻 ✨ 🔥 ✨
Some things just. are. IMO
I really appreciate your generous list add and your visit as a whole. I have missed you and hope you are doing well.
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
-B
It's that awareness.... for sure.
I thank you for reading and leaving your heated thoughts, my friend 🙏🏻 ✨ 🔥 ✨
Some things just. are. IMO
I really appreciate your generous list add and your visit as a whole. I have missed you and hope you are doing well.
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
-B
Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
25th Apr 2021 1:47am
Fantastic tribute to the female erogenous zone! Reminds me of something Isabel Allende said that men often look too low for the feminine G-spot which in fact is verbal. Thank you for putting roaring passion into my night. I love feeling this as you unleashed your heat into your words.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
26th Apr 2021 5:54am
My lovely friend 🙏🏻... I'm so sorry that I missed this comment, I think that I was so overwhelmed by your thoughts yesterday... I must have missed this.... and how dare I!!n(I tease myself!) Especially with the admission of roaring passion!! Wow, what an amazing accomplishment for both of us, I fully believe... lol.... Awww!! I thank you for that knowledge of a job well done and the list add, John. You made my night, yet again! My cup runneth over, indeed.
Warmest regards,
🌹
B
Warmest regards,
🌹
B
Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
26th Apr 2021 6:38am
Love it when we touch our erogenous zones, you by writing, me by feeling the heat of your words. You made my night.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
27th Apr 2021 2:27pm
Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
27th Apr 2021 6:32pm
Ty very much... yes, indeed... one of them, at least.... there's definitely a variety.... ;)
I appreciate the visit and your comments
🌹
-B
I appreciate the visit and your comments
🌹
-B
Anonymous
- Edited 9th May 2021 8:45pm
29th Apr 2021 4:35am
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Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
I forgot about this one....I'm giggling about that, as I told you the poems were, meh.... 🤭
(blushes)
Ty for reading and your extremely EXTREMELY kind comments. I actually really liked the way this one turned out and I'm glad you felt my slight intensity of that joy....
I greatly appreciate your compliments, my dear.
It's such a pleasure to see you 🦋
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
-S
(blushes)
Ty for reading and your extremely EXTREMELY kind comments. I actually really liked the way this one turned out and I'm glad you felt my slight intensity of that joy....
I greatly appreciate your compliments, my dear.
It's such a pleasure to see you 🦋
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
-S
Anonymous
- Edited 9th May 2021 8:45pm
29th Apr 2021 5:18am
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Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
29th Apr 2021 10:33pm
Like opening a safe or playing the piano; align the tumblers and open sesame, play the right keys and make sweet music.
I feel like a spy and now I now the passcode into your inner sanctum! LOL!
I feel like a spy and now I now the passcode into your inner sanctum! LOL!
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Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
29th Apr 2021 10:38pm
You know the first number on a tumbler of several numbers.... Hmmmmm....I am a tad more complex....I can't be giving away ALL my secrets.... just enough to tempt... 😉😈💋😇
You're on the right track.... 007...lol
Loved this comment, Ty for the smiles, Leo.
🌹
You're on the right track.... 007...lol
Loved this comment, Ty for the smiles, Leo.
🌹
Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
29th Apr 2021 10:59pm
Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
30th Apr 2021 00:09am
Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
13th Jun 2021 2:18am
OMG. "That spot" and "my innermost core - the sanctum..." I think these words and phrases alone really go in depth as to the desire and ache of all that is lust and yearning.
Absolutely amazing write Blue.
Absolutely amazing write Blue.
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Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
13th Jun 2021 3:05am
Mmmm... I love the OMG!... lol...
Thanks for the awesome comments and generous list add, Walter. I'm glad you felt the yearn!
🌹 - 🔥
-B
Thanks for the awesome comments and generous list add, Walter. I'm glad you felt the yearn!
🌹 - 🔥
-B
Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
12th Aug 2022 2:56am
Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
12th Aug 2022 6:40am
Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
12th Aug 2022 10:19am
Good good or bad good?
I've been in Houston today. It's a weird trend here to dress to the 9's, drop dead sexy fuckable but have an emotional demeanor on their faces that displays contempt or disgust.
It says, I'm sexy as hell but I have no joy, like they expect to have to simply emotionally check out. Maybe it's botox.
Then some woman will walk by in a t-shirt and sweat pants, but she is obviously having herself an I'm wearing a vibrator right now sorta day, and the smile on her face is 100% Gucci.
I think attitude and self-fulfilment blows red soled spike high heels right out of the water.
I'm an inveterate people watcher. Houston is very challenging. Austin is the hippy look capital of the Southwest. Houston is a 3 hour drive for me. Austin is a 5 hour drive. I will drive to Austin, take myself out to dinner, and just bath in the voyeuristic temple of hippy girl smiles just to make myself feel better.
I was just there 2 months ago. A 31 hour trip total time. Organic dinner and breakfast, and 10 hours of driving... just so I can see a smile.
I appreciate fashion, I do. But, a face that says I like myself and I'm a joy to be with is as hot as it gets. Bon Appetite.
Houston is just.... nice clothes. Austin is....all the rest.
I've been in Houston today. It's a weird trend here to dress to the 9's, drop dead sexy fuckable but have an emotional demeanor on their faces that displays contempt or disgust.
It says, I'm sexy as hell but I have no joy, like they expect to have to simply emotionally check out. Maybe it's botox.
Then some woman will walk by in a t-shirt and sweat pants, but she is obviously having herself an I'm wearing a vibrator right now sorta day, and the smile on her face is 100% Gucci.
I think attitude and self-fulfilment blows red soled spike high heels right out of the water.
I'm an inveterate people watcher. Houston is very challenging. Austin is the hippy look capital of the Southwest. Houston is a 3 hour drive for me. Austin is a 5 hour drive. I will drive to Austin, take myself out to dinner, and just bath in the voyeuristic temple of hippy girl smiles just to make myself feel better.
I was just there 2 months ago. A 31 hour trip total time. Organic dinner and breakfast, and 10 hours of driving... just so I can see a smile.
I appreciate fashion, I do. But, a face that says I like myself and I'm a joy to be with is as hot as it gets. Bon Appetite.
Houston is just.... nice clothes. Austin is....all the rest.
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Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
2nd Jul 2023 7:58pm
Yes and double yes!!
The sensual and feral undercurrent
of the human condition
On full display
You nailed this perfectly BV!!
The sensual and feral undercurrent
of the human condition
On full display
You nailed this perfectly BV!!
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Re: Re. a kryptonite of flesh.
2nd Jul 2023 8:03pm
Thanks for delving back into this one... I forget about so many I've written but this one has a soft spot, given it's blunt truthfulness.
Glad you found the sensual nature up to par... love that!
🌹💙
Glad you found the sensual nature up to par... love that!
🌹💙