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Heartbreak
dagger penetrates
withdraws
incision barely visible
seemingly minor
wound weeps
tiny crimson tears
assailant leaves
knowing that life is short
death is immanent
the heart sobs
love fading
© 2021 Raibeart Bruis
withdraws
incision barely visible
seemingly minor
wound weeps
tiny crimson tears
assailant leaves
knowing that life is short
death is immanent
the heart sobs
love fading
© 2021 Raibeart Bruis
Published 22nd Apr 2021
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22nd Apr 2021 3:31pm
23rd Apr 2021 3:17pm
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Apr 2021 4:28pm
22nd Apr 2021 4:27pm
Each word was like it's own little dagger of truth...I love the flow of the minimalism, it really is powerful, imo; which allows for the emanating of your aptly chosen titled emotion in such succinct brevity. I think most(if not all) can completely relate....
Great ink, KP
🌹
xo
B
Great ink, KP
🌹
xo
B
23rd Apr 2021 3:17pm
23rd Apr 2021 5:47am
The truth does set you free, as long as you did not wrong to hurt your mate like cheating on her. Keep on writing.
23rd Apr 2021 3:18pm
