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Cheesy break up poem
I hang precariously by invisible
strings
Itchy rope-burns has become my
thing
feelings left open raw and
exposed
now a ticking time bomb ready to
explode
I told you truth you fed me
lies
you played the victim in
disguise
I took a chance gave you my
heart
but now cant wait till we’re
apart
nothing left to talk about I’m already
gone
I’ll lock the door behind me goodbye so
long
Published 20th Apr 2021
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Anonymous
20th Apr 2021 5:29am
I love cheese 🧀
Well done you!!
💙🌹💙🌹💙🌹💙
I'm sending warm and peaceful vibes your way,
my lovely friend! ✨ 💫 ✨
ps - and look... only ten more poems left!
That's so so doable!!! 👍🏻
Woo-hoo 🎉 😁
Well done you!!
💙🌹💙🌹💙🌹💙
I'm sending warm and peaceful vibes your way,
my lovely friend! ✨ 💫 ✨
ps - and look... only ten more poems left!
That's so so doable!!! 👍🏻
Woo-hoo 🎉 😁
20th Apr 2021 6:54am
Anonymous
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20th Apr 2021 7:01am
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20th Apr 2021 2:00pm
21st Apr 2021 4:20am
Cheesy but honest and expressive. There is might in your words iron in your poetry. You have the strength for breakaway. I read it here and through your poetry. You have the moxie to make the break.
Xo sister Jackie,
John
Xo sister Jackie,
John
25th Apr 2021 7:01am
Sis, he was a loosah! Good Riddings. Me and my boyz will tune him up lateah.
25th Apr 2021 2:19pm
Lol@ tune him up later! Hahahha i love that!
How have you been where have you been?
Are you alright? WB!
Big huge hugs
Your sis
Jackie ♥️♥️🤗
How have you been where have you been?
Are you alright? WB!
Big huge hugs
Your sis
Jackie ♥️♥️🤗
30th Apr 2021 8:00pm
Great title ... pulled me in ... the poem carried me till the end ... like the long stanza ... single word structure ... fits so well ...
15th May 2021 4:23pm
"feelings left open raw and
exposed
now a ticking time bomb ready to
explode
I told you truth you fed me
lies..
Right in between this stanzas I know I'm in for some serious shit..
exposed
now a ticking time bomb ready to
explode
I told you truth you fed me
lies..
Right in between this stanzas I know I'm in for some serious shit..
