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Instrumental Echoes
Skin a’tremble.. I surrender-
on knees parted before you
like a broken prayer.. in soft~eyed arching..
Watch me, fingers~deep, mimicking your touch;
~a slow writhing of soul~
where you strummed my shadows..
..and my please?.. a beckoning,
licked across your knuckles..
‘Come, play your witch’s harp-
bangin’ the bruises from last night
in smooth D Major..
and I will sing for you again..
on knees parted before you
like a broken prayer.. in soft~eyed arching..
Watch me, fingers~deep, mimicking your touch;
~a slow writhing of soul~
where you strummed my shadows..
..and my please?.. a beckoning,
licked across your knuckles..
‘Come, play your witch’s harp-
bangin’ the bruises from last night
in smooth D Major..
and I will sing for you again..
Published 20th Apr 2021
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20th Apr 2021 4:13am
Spicy!! I love your phrasing and wordplay. Fantastic imagery and awesome metaphor, too. 🙂
20th Apr 2021 1:32pm
I am in humble grin for ur thoughtful comment and thank u so much for takin time here, sweet poet!
wishing you such a shinee day~~☆
~d
wishing you such a shinee day~~☆
~d
20th Apr 2021 12:36pm
20th Apr 2021 1:40pm
aww, dear PoetS, tyty.. ur comments always have me smilin.. I So appreciate you!
huggins,
~d
huggins,
~d
7th May 2021 11:23am
29th Jun 2021 4:10pm
I am much obliged for the read, sir poet.. Thank u so much for takin time on my conjurings ;)
fancee day to u,
~d
fancee day to u,
~d
19th Jun 2021 9:13pm
29th Jun 2021 4:14pm
I am in curtsies of - I do hope so's ;) ...an astral share, perhaps?..
ever adore u on my page, Major Darlin..
mwahs
~d
ever adore u on my page, Major Darlin..
mwahs
~d
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
30th Jun 2021 5:50pm
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3rd Jul 2021 1:47am
You give such good feedback, sir poet, cannot thank u enuff for takin time here. Truly. and u didnt even use the word "sensual" [yea still lmao bout that post] ;)
Awesome you, be well n hv a fancee wknd! i shall be here catchin up a bit.
~d
Awesome you, be well n hv a fancee wknd! i shall be here catchin up a bit.
~d
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
3rd Jul 2021 2:37am
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14th Dec 2021 6:49pm
An absolutely clever write, I'm digging the wordplay. "Wicth's harp" lovely, lovely, you are an enchantress.
LJ
LJ
