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Depression lingers
Much like the fog hovering over a lake,
The depression lingers and my life is at stake.
Like the moss clinging onto the rocks on the coast line,
I have many triggers and it feels like each one is a land mine.
Just like the animals in a zoo pacing the grounds craving freedom from their cages,
I too find myself trapped in constant emotional stages.
The depression lingers and my life is at stake.
Like the moss clinging onto the rocks on the coast line,
I have many triggers and it feels like each one is a land mine.
Just like the animals in a zoo pacing the grounds craving freedom from their cages,
I too find myself trapped in constant emotional stages.
Published 16th Apr 2021
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16th Apr 2021 4:44am
Dear M,
Each metaphorical example you write is exactly the agitated feeling of anxiety. Feeling caged and pent up is maddening. There is so much energy in this piece describing these feelings. A very helpful write for so many of us who feel this way to relate. H🌷
Each metaphorical example you write is exactly the agitated feeling of anxiety. Feeling caged and pent up is maddening. There is so much energy in this piece describing these feelings. A very helpful write for so many of us who feel this way to relate. H🌷
16th Apr 2021 5:22am
