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Depressive
What’s it to you but for peace of mind
But what do words do if it’s the feeling we can not find
Maybe we are the ones you left behind
Forced to walk a path with no end in sight
An unlit path with an unobtainable map
I am me
We are sad
Lonely in a room full of people
An insomnia that can’t be remedied by any sleep pill
But what do words do if it’s the feeling we can not find
Maybe we are the ones you left behind
Forced to walk a path with no end in sight
An unlit path with an unobtainable map
I am me
We are sad
Lonely in a room full of people
An insomnia that can’t be remedied by any sleep pill
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Re. Depressive
16th Apr 2021 1:03am
That freaking pic fits this piece dude. Her proposed darkness so fits your last five lines. This is indeed a tight piece
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Re: Re. Depressive
16th Apr 2021 1:06am
Thank you. I use only my photos for the imagery. I found writing and photography to be my muse.
Re: Re. Depressive
16th Apr 2021 1:19am
Re. Depressive
16th Apr 2021 3:02am
You poetry to the peace you deserve, or you smoke the peace pipe. Keep on writing.
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Re. Depressive
16th Apr 2021 4:20am
Dear WF,
I was drawn by the title however this phrase:
“ But what do words do if it’s the feeling we can not find ” made me do a double take. The depth of this statement is phenomenal and until just now I hadn’t put that in order. Strange what the universe will put in a path to be found. I found your poem wonderfully enlightening and extremely helpful. H🌷
I was drawn by the title however this phrase:
“ But what do words do if it’s the feeling we can not find ” made me do a double take. The depth of this statement is phenomenal and until just now I hadn’t put that in order. Strange what the universe will put in a path to be found. I found your poem wonderfully enlightening and extremely helpful. H🌷
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Re: Re. Depressive
16th Apr 2021 3:35pm
Re. Depressive
16th Apr 2021 7:49am
Such a heartfelt write...
Very depressive indeed...
Given how zombie like we live our lives
With no peace and sleep insight
Great ink
Very depressive indeed...
Given how zombie like we live our lives
With no peace and sleep insight
Great ink
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Re. Depressive
9th Jul 2021 10:02am