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Daydreamed about Putting Gum in Her Hair
High School
She sat in front of me
Long beautiful blond hair
The fantasy of all the boys
Envy of the girls too
I hated her easy looks
Had daydreams of putting gum in her hair
A whole wad of it
Would have had to cut it all off
Then she wouldn't be so special
Never did it
High School was a mess for me
Undiagnosed ADD
Mind wandering all the time
Grew out of it eventually
I think back on those juvenile delinquent days
Should have been sniffing glue with the other drones
The blond with long hair eventually became a friend
She was broken inside, I related to her sadness
We used to cut class, go get coffee and smoke cigarettes
She sat in front of me
Long beautiful blond hair
The fantasy of all the boys
Envy of the girls too
I hated her easy looks
Had daydreams of putting gum in her hair
A whole wad of it
Would have had to cut it all off
Then she wouldn't be so special
Never did it
High School was a mess for me
Undiagnosed ADD
Mind wandering all the time
Grew out of it eventually
I think back on those juvenile delinquent days
Should have been sniffing glue with the other drones
The blond with long hair eventually became a friend
She was broken inside, I related to her sadness
We used to cut class, go get coffee and smoke cigarettes
Author's Note
Fucked up youth
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Re. Daydreamed about Putting Gum in Her Hair
14th Apr 2021 1:00pm
This piece instantly reminded me of 8th grade. I was friends with a girl who wasn't always a very good friend. One day she came to school and spent all of the hours leading up to lunch bragging about her jelly filled twinkie and how she was the first to have them at school (they were indeed new). By lunch I was pretty well sick of listening to her so when she pulled it out of the wrapper and put it up to her mouth to take a bite, I reached across the table and smashed it in her face. Needless to say she didn't speak to me for like 2 weeks. But I didn't care. She never brought those twinkies for lunch again.
I'm glad that you and your bubble gum girl became friends. Sometimes we don't realize how broken other people are on the inside. And that they are just like us. Great piece of nostalgia.
I'm glad that you and your bubble gum girl became friends. Sometimes we don't realize how broken other people are on the inside. And that they are just like us. Great piece of nostalgia.
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14th Apr 2021 1:07pm
I can really see you doing that
A great personal victory at that age
Worthy of detention too
I got a lot of detention back then,I kind of liked it, a chance to get away from everyone who was yelling at me ...
Thx for the read and great comment E
Appreciate you
A great personal victory at that age
Worthy of detention too
I got a lot of detention back then,I kind of liked it, a chance to get away from everyone who was yelling at me ...
Thx for the read and great comment E
Appreciate you
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14th Apr 2021 1:19pm
I was in detention a lot that year. My best friend, Josh and I got into a lot of trouble for things like lighting smoke bombs in the bathroom. We took a class trip that year to Chicago and took Amtrak to get there. On the way back we got into a fist fight (over twinkie girl pouring soda on his head while he was sleeping: he thought I did it). We were supposed to be suspended the final few days of school, but the principal changed his mind. I was the class president so I had to give my farewell address at our graduation ceremony. Many teachers said we were the worst class to come through that tiny private school :D
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Re: Re. Daydreamed about Putting Gum in Her Hair
14th Apr 2021 2:24pm
Being the worst is sometimes a distinction....
These are great stories, gum in the hair doesn't seem so bad now 😍
These are great stories, gum in the hair doesn't seem so bad now 😍
Re. Daydreamed about Putting Gum in Her Hair
14th Apr 2021 3:27pm
Oh ... this took me back ... to classmates whose zenith was high school ... who are now miserable ... this also reminds me that we have no idea what people are going thru in the struggle called life ... thanks for reminding of that ...
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Re: Re. Daydreamed about Putting Gum in Her Hair
14th Apr 2021 3:41pm
I could not wait to get out of high school and forget the entire mess.
Rode to my graduation on my cousin's motorcycle in my cap and gown. Listened to a bullshit speech by the school's principal on leading a moral life, got my diploma and left fast
Irony: the principal was soon thereafter busted on a morals charge ....
Appreciate the read and comment Lil
Rode to my graduation on my cousin's motorcycle in my cap and gown. Listened to a bullshit speech by the school's principal on leading a moral life, got my diploma and left fast
Irony: the principal was soon thereafter busted on a morals charge ....
Appreciate the read and comment Lil
Re. Daydreamed about Putting Gum in Her Hair
14th Apr 2021 4:50pm
Oh boy! going to take everyone back to high school with this one. You really got me with the bubble gum in the long blonde hair. I think I will have nightmares about that now. Truly evil. lol Anything but that... ;) I can identify with the she was broken inside. Never smoked cigarettes but I would cut class for the coffee or... other stuff. :p
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Re: Re. Daydreamed about Putting Gum in Her Hair
14th Apr 2021 5:04pm
Yes, it would have been evil to do the gum thing to her so I didn't
And she was pretty cool once I got to know her. The beauty thing was a real burden for her ...
Hope you don't get nightmares, though I do have other sadistic stories that might...
Thx Kx
And she was pretty cool once I got to know her. The beauty thing was a real burden for her ...
Hope you don't get nightmares, though I do have other sadistic stories that might...
Thx Kx
Re: Re. Daydreamed about Putting Gum in Her Hair
14th Apr 2021 5:17pm
Now I want some sadistic bedtime stories. The beauty thing can be a real burden; if anything it probably increases the chances of very bad things happening to someone so being broken is no surprise either.
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Re: Re. Daydreamed about Putting Gum in Her Hair
14th Apr 2021 5:27pm
I've never had the burden of beauty but I can tell you I looked mighty fine in a double breastfed suit with a classic polkadot dot tie and French cuff shirt with cuff links from my corporate days back when.
I remember walking down the street and getting a lot of attention and while it was great it made me wonder about the burden of it.
Soon thereafter I ditched that life and just started wearing a lot of black like other NYC Misfits
I remember walking down the street and getting a lot of attention and while it was great it made me wonder about the burden of it.
Soon thereafter I ditched that life and just started wearing a lot of black like other NYC Misfits
Re. Daydreamed about Putting Gum in Her Hair
14th Apr 2021 5:19pm
The looming shadows of Memory Lane.
High school. A life time ago, yet poignant.
I like this.
High school. A life time ago, yet poignant.
I like this.
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Re: Re. Daydreamed about Putting Gum in Her Hair
14th Apr 2021 5:29pm
it was fun to write and mostly all true.
I never really thought about sniffing glue because too many kids really got messed up doing that. Even i could understand that wasn't cool ....
Thanks J
I never really thought about sniffing glue because too many kids really got messed up doing that. Even i could understand that wasn't cool ....
Thanks J
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15th Apr 2021 5:41am
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Re. Daydreamed about Putting Gum in Her Hair
20th Apr 2021 5:56pm
It amazes me how I've become friends with some people who were dicks back in school (not saying your blond was a dick, but it just made me think of it). At some point you realize we were just all people trying to figure shit out...
Glad you didn't do the evil gum thing though. 🙂
Glad you didn't do the evil gum thing though. 🙂
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Re: Re. Daydreamed about Putting Gum in Her Hair
20th Apr 2021 6:24pm
High School was a bad scene for me
Life afterwards was much better though still a cluster...
This was a hoot to write
Fun comments too
I guess I got something out of those formative years
Thx
Xx
Life afterwards was much better though still a cluster...
This was a hoot to write
Fun comments too
I guess I got something out of those formative years
Thx
Xx
Re. Daydreamed about Putting Gum in Her Hair
11th May 2021 4:38am
I sat in front of a guy I liked, could hear him chuckling during class in 10th grade. He was really friendly so I thought he liked me too. I later found out from a girlfriend who knew him that he was a total stoner and that explained how friendly he was. It was an irony. Learned a lot from that one.
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Re: Re. Daydreamed about Putting Gum in Her Hair
11th May 2021 12:19pm
If i could go back to those high school years and do it all over again, I wouldn't.....
I was glad to get out of there and move on to other disasters. It was that bad !!! But, that said, there were a few people who believed in me so this story emerged out of those memories
Thx for the read and comment PR
I was glad to get out of there and move on to other disasters. It was that bad !!! But, that said, there were a few people who believed in me so this story emerged out of those memories
Thx for the read and comment PR
Re. Daydreamed about Putting Gum in Her Hair
27th May 2021 9:28pm
It's interesting because there are times we are drawn toward others who may be just like us on the inside.
Excellent reflective write sir. If we only knew then what we know lots of things could have been avoided, but that's some of life's lesson.
Thanks for sharing.
Excellent reflective write sir. If we only knew then what we know lots of things could have been avoided, but that's some of life's lesson.
Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Re. Daydreamed about Putting Gum in Her Hair
27th May 2021 10:03pm
This was a fun one to write and mostly true. Added a few embellishments to souce it up
Appreciate the read, you make a lot of good points Wally
Thx
Appreciate the read, you make a lot of good points Wally
Thx
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