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Evergreen Journey
Evergreen Journey
Sandstone terrace of mesa
Where wife takes her naked stand
For freedom beyond speech
There her bramble blesses our ramble
With her coniferous eyes
On an evergreen journey
Sandstone terrace of mesa
Where wife takes her naked stand
For freedom beyond speech
There her bramble blesses our ramble
With her coniferous eyes
On an evergreen journey
Published 13th Apr 2021
| Edited 15th Apr 2021
Author's Note
It was a lovely day in the wilderness and by my encouragement, my wife disrobed completely. I was sitting at her feet and admiring her form as she gazed across the forest. Quite a memorable day in the hills.
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Anonymous
14th Apr 2021 1:28am
I adore the incomparable "John-esque" style imagery that always creates the most vividly beautiful pictures within my mind; along with that killer last line, and it's a truly lovely poem, indeed.
Ty for sharing, my friend 🙏
🌹
x
-Susan
Ty for sharing, my friend 🙏
🌹
x
-Susan
14th Apr 2021 1:30am
Thank you so much for the RL and your words my friend. It was a lovely day in the wilderness and by my encouragement, my wife disrobed completely. I was sitting at her feet and admiring her form as she gazed across the forest. Quite a memorable day in the hills.
Xo
John
Xo
John
