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Some Things Don't Change ( Shower Poem )
In the shower I'm thinking about change
Got some life stuff on the horizon
The things I tried hard to change just didn't
I was looking for a curve but got struck out with the slider
Got some life stuff on the horizon
The things I tried hard to change just didn't
I was looking for a curve but got struck out with the slider
Published 13th Apr 2021
| Edited 12th Oct 2024
Author's Note
I'll get it together, I always do, bear with me please ....
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Anonymous
13th Apr 2021 3:08pm
If it wasn't for the ups and downs, they're wouldn't be any ups and downs.
I can relate to this. Love it.
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Lexi
I can relate to this. Love it.
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Lexi
13th Apr 2021 3:16pm
You’re right about that Lexi
Just watching the river and am trying to go with the flow ....
Thx for your take
X
Just watching the river and am trying to go with the flow ....
Thx for your take
X
Anonymous
13th Apr 2021 3:35pm
You are very welcome.
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13th Apr 2021 8:30pm
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
13th Apr 2021 3:36pm
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13th Apr 2021 8:29pm
13th Apr 2021 3:48pm
When I am wet ... well ... I digress ... nice introspective write ... vulnerable ... yet with that "don't get too close" Bukowskism ever present ... well poeted PS ...
13th Apr 2021 8:31pm
13th Apr 2021 5:05pm
This is my least favourite season. New life, blah, blah, blah, all I see is mud and naked trees...
A little pity party in the shower never hurt anyone. Have a good wallow and then get back on the field, sir.
❤
A little pity party in the shower never hurt anyone. Have a good wallow and then get back on the field, sir.
❤
13th Apr 2021 8:32pm
Yeah, i was down this morning but feel better this afternoon
Sometimes I have to get out of my own way
Sometimes I have to get out of my own way
13th Apr 2021 5:18pm
13th Apr 2021 8:34pm
Don’t touch that dial, I’ll know !!
Shower rules, getting touch with yourself and sing if it comes to that ....
Thx yo
Shower rules, getting touch with yourself and sing if it comes to that ....
Thx yo
15th Apr 2021 5:47am
15th Apr 2021 12:22pm
26th May 2021 5:03pm
I never really realized how many ideas really come to us in the shower, like prepping for the day, refreshing, cleansing, etc.
Insightful write Poet.
Insightful write Poet.
26th May 2021 5:15pm
