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What I Can't See
Bang goes the body falling to the floor.
Clatter goes the trash scattered down the hall.
Bark goes the dog in distress of a terrible scene.
Ding goes the phone calling the authorities.
Clatter goes the trash scattered down the hall.
Bark goes the dog in distress of a terrible scene.
Ding goes the phone calling the authorities.
Published 13th Apr 2021
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13th Apr 2021 5:04am
Dear A,
Difficult subject on which to comment and I’m sorry. It never ceases to amaze me the circumstances someone lives with and I’m oblivious. How to help? Usefully help? Your poem raises and begs the question. This is a great write poem. In its brevity you’ve pinpointed a huge issue.
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Difficult subject on which to comment and I’m sorry. It never ceases to amaze me the circumstances someone lives with and I’m oblivious. How to help? Usefully help? Your poem raises and begs the question. This is a great write poem. In its brevity you’ve pinpointed a huge issue.
H🌷
