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[ NaPo 2021 ] [ OPAR ] Ainulindalė

 
They were Illuvatar's thoughts  
children educated in art of Music  
and Free Will endowed  
to complement the Maker's  
marvellous vibrations with  
unique, theoried strings;  
 
songsmithes in their own right  
and the instruments themselves  
in concert, woven into a single  
grand theme,  
 
                          corrupted  
by one of their very own  
changing tune as he sings  
to suit his own vanity  
 
Sown, the discord was  
throughout creation  
 
further inspiring Illuvatar  
to weave in further themes of  
Elves and Man;  
 
Humanity  
 
 
Written by JohnnyBlaze
Published | Edited 2nd Nov 2021
Author's Note
inspired by J.R.R. Tolkien's "The Silmarilion"
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