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The Birth of Bliss
Breathing through
immense pain, tightening
from lumbar to abdomen.
Doubt washing over me with each wave:
wondering whether we would make it.
And then one final push.
No other defining moment in life has produced
euphoria quite like seeing your face
for the very first time—
Sentiments of pure bliss.
immense pain, tightening
from lumbar to abdomen.
Doubt washing over me with each wave:
wondering whether we would make it.
And then one final push.
No other defining moment in life has produced
euphoria quite like seeing your face
for the very first time—
Sentiments of pure bliss.
Published 7th Apr 2021
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8th Apr 2021 4:27am
This is gorgeous. And it resonated to the absolute core. That moment is such a life-changing one, every single time. Oof, my heart. Thank you for sharing this, Eerie 💜
9th Apr 2021 11:46pm
Thank you, Luna. There is no experience like it, and my words do not even kind of adequately describe the associated feelings. How do you really capture that on paper?
8th Apr 2021 1:24pm
This is so lovely and beautiful Eerie, yes that moment of birth, its still saved within the lens of my mind.
I remember suddenly seeing this small creature looking at me with wise eyes of recognition saying
Hi, its me, remember
Thanks for bringing back such precious memories! Greets
R
I remember suddenly seeing this small creature looking at me with wise eyes of recognition saying
Hi, its me, remember
Thanks for bringing back such precious memories! Greets
R
9th Apr 2021 11:47pm
They are precious memories, aren't they? The best. Thanks for stopping by, RiAN.
18th May 2021 9:58pm
The miracle of life is truly a gift many women are able to experience (aside from the pain) but it really is a blissful moment when you are able look right into their eyes. It's a beautiful sentiment you've expressed here, something that can be treasured forever.
