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The Greatest Love of all Time
can’t make sense of these miracles
maybe God does exist
even if the devil’s on my shoulder
but it doesn’t matter to me
I can always lose myself in your eyes
so if we don’t make it to heaven
I’ll gladly hold you in hell
we could be just about anywhere
and it’ll feel like bliss
when all is said and done
burn me up with my lover
mix our ashes together
and on the urn write
“the greatest love of all time”
some days you’re drowning
and I’m trying to save you
some days I’m internally crying
and you wipe the tears away
life is infectious to the mind
as pain increases we go mad
but we find ways to keep our sanity
when perfection is unattainable
we can still promise our presence
hugs and kisses forever
from me to you
when all is said and done
burn me up with my lover
mix our ashes together
and on the urn write
“the greatest love of all time”
love can bring peace to the soul
I don’t have all the answers
but don’t need them
when heaven is you, I’m levitating
off the ground up towards the sky
if I could take away my stress
and take away your worries
I’d forget about the whole damn world
and just sink my universe into yours
maybe God does exist
even if the devil’s on my shoulder
but it doesn’t matter to me
I can always lose myself in your eyes
so if we don’t make it to heaven
I’ll gladly hold you in hell
we could be just about anywhere
and it’ll feel like bliss
when all is said and done
burn me up with my lover
mix our ashes together
and on the urn write
“the greatest love of all time”
some days you’re drowning
and I’m trying to save you
some days I’m internally crying
and you wipe the tears away
life is infectious to the mind
as pain increases we go mad
but we find ways to keep our sanity
when perfection is unattainable
we can still promise our presence
hugs and kisses forever
from me to you
when all is said and done
burn me up with my lover
mix our ashes together
and on the urn write
“the greatest love of all time”
love can bring peace to the soul
I don’t have all the answers
but don’t need them
when heaven is you, I’m levitating
off the ground up towards the sky
if I could take away my stress
and take away your worries
I’d forget about the whole damn world
and just sink my universe into yours
Published 7th Apr 2021
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7th Apr 2021 7:46am
8th Apr 2021 8:52am
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Apr 2021 7:50am
7th Apr 2021 7:49am
Your write feels like you're speaking to your soul mate and pouring it all out there, in person. It's just beatific work;such a personal, intimate and tender sensibility, DC. It's a great love story you're describing. To me, it's as moving and romantic as anyone would every dare dream to wish for. I was utterly transfixed, reading.
Thank you for sharing, my friend
Much love and respect,
🌹
-B
x
Thank you for sharing, my friend
Much love and respect,
🌹
-B
x
8th Apr 2021 8:55am
That's such a great compliment. I'm glad my poem was heartfelt. Thank you very much. I appreciate the read 😁
