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Womb of the dying
Sometimes
death
comes
an
unfathomed
calendar
Leap year lands
in the lap of time
rear
view
mirrored
structure
basis of belief
cultivating
self
limitations
anxious to design
greatest of crushes
each day shifts
recordings
exist
of
laughter
wild timid wind
returning
in my body
I have kisses on my cheeks
from blackest bruises
of ashen mouths
your bones
will not
break
me
death
comes
an
unfathomed
calendar
Leap year lands
in the lap of time
rear
view
mirrored
structure
basis of belief
cultivating
self
limitations
anxious to design
greatest of crushes
each day shifts
recordings
exist
of
laughter
wild timid wind
returning
in my body
I have kisses on my cheeks
from blackest bruises
of ashen mouths
your bones
will not
break
me
Published 7th Apr 2021
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Omg Rian !!!!! Your words explode on this page like vivid strokes of fury. For me I feel like this is perhaps about a past marriage memories that were awful to be blunt. Maybe even DV and if that is true, you’re descriptive imagery is spot on and magnificently written, you clever clever woman you ☺️
Thanks for sharing your intimate thoughts
You are loved here ♥️🤗
Your good friend and sister in ink
Love Jackie 🌹
Thanks for sharing your intimate thoughts
You are loved here ♥️🤗
Your good friend and sister in ink
Love Jackie 🌹
8th Apr 2021 7:12am
Hello Jackie,
Thank you for all your kind words and compliments on this poem. This poem is about a lot of things really, yes its also about breaking bonds with someone, about breaking free from what scars us.
And about spiritual death as a theme, So your observations are quite correct, thanks for sharing your thoughts and honored about the list add beautiful sister. Light to you
xo
R!
Thank you for all your kind words and compliments on this poem. This poem is about a lot of things really, yes its also about breaking bonds with someone, about breaking free from what scars us.
And about spiritual death as a theme, So your observations are quite correct, thanks for sharing your thoughts and honored about the list add beautiful sister. Light to you
xo
R!
7th Apr 2021 7:53am
Hello Ljd, and good to see you visit, Im glad to know you enjoyed this poem, thanks for visiting, honored about the list add, light to you, greets
R
R
Your strength flares apparent off the page, Rian.
The vivid imagery is all the stuff legends. I am always so grateful to have found you and your writings, here. I learn from your creative essence and uniquely styled offerings and I soak it up. I appreciate this brave and honest poem.
You're a pillar, yes of strength but now of luminescent light! ✨ 💫 ✨
Much love and respect...
🌹
-B
x
ps - the pic is just amazing!
The vivid imagery is all the stuff legends. I am always so grateful to have found you and your writings, here. I learn from your creative essence and uniquely styled offerings and I soak it up. I appreciate this brave and honest poem.
You're a pillar, yes of strength but now of luminescent light! ✨ 💫 ✨
Much love and respect...
🌹
-B
x
ps - the pic is just amazing!
Dear Blue,
Your words are always so warm and supportive. Humbled to be described as luminescent light, However dark some themes might be I try to focus on the light within. This poem is a bit of everything, it really is about Death on all levels of existence and beyond that.
Dehn Soras art helped to create this poem also, I dint know him before but stumbled upon his art while reading an article on the net.
Honored about the list add
light to you beautiful sister
xo
R
Your words are always so warm and supportive. Humbled to be described as luminescent light, However dark some themes might be I try to focus on the light within. This poem is a bit of everything, it really is about Death on all levels of existence and beyond that.
Dehn Soras art helped to create this poem also, I dint know him before but stumbled upon his art while reading an article on the net.
Honored about the list add
light to you beautiful sister
xo
R
7th Apr 2021 1:29pm
8th Apr 2021 7:31am
Thank you for stopping by beautifil ister, honored about the list add
light to you
xo
R
light to you
xo
R
7th Apr 2021 7:06pm
I love this poem.
I especially love the last two stanzas.
Just incredibly beautiful to me.
I especially love the last two stanzas.
Just incredibly beautiful to me.
8th Apr 2021 7:33am
Hello Javalini,
So nice to see you visiting my pages, I very much appreciate your words and taking the time to read and comment! Light to you
greets
R
So nice to see you visiting my pages, I very much appreciate your words and taking the time to read and comment! Light to you
greets
R
8th Apr 2021 10:17pm
There is something of the shadows of beingness, the endurance trials that show us what we are made of, the sands of time, rivers of scars in the molecules of our being, that create our topography, in your vivid detailing. It is exquisite to ponder.
9th Apr 2021 6:55am
Daniel,
That description should get a golden medal, you are so poetry empathic. I feel you are so linked to the deeper meanings of poetry that you can see the wholeness of it. Thank you so much for seeing!
Light to you
R
Honored about the list add!
That description should get a golden medal, you are so poetry empathic. I feel you are so linked to the deeper meanings of poetry that you can see the wholeness of it. Thank you so much for seeing!
Light to you
R
Honored about the list add!
