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i could work this poem all day
while the garden lies fallow
and paint peels off the soffit
and i know it bothers her
because it's not food or money
or cleaning up the mess
but only me sitting
thinking
writing
typing
tweaking
drowning
like a man
who loves to drown
while the garden lies fallow
and paint peels off the soffit
and i know it bothers her
because it's not food or money
or cleaning up the mess
but only me sitting
thinking
writing
typing
tweaking
drowning
like a man
who loves to drown
Published 4th Apr 2021
Author's Note
The truth is like many I write between obligations and interruptions.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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4th Apr 2021 1:58pm
4th Apr 2021 2:20pm
Anonymous
4th Apr 2021 2:49pm
Resonates completely, Jav
Just a gem of a piece here.
Really nicely penned
🌹
xo
-B
Just a gem of a piece here.
Really nicely penned
🌹
xo
-B
4th Apr 2021 3:12pm
Thanks so much, Blue.
We poets are prospectors panning for words. I just read a poem that indicated that, and I loved it.
Your comments are much appreciated.
J.
We poets are prospectors panning for words. I just read a poem that indicated that, and I loved it.
Your comments are much appreciated.
J.
Anonymous
- Edited 18th Nov 2021 8:45pm
10th Apr 2021 3:30pm
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10th Apr 2021 5:00pm
Thanks, R.
I've been loving your poetry and am honored you stopped in to read some of mine.
J.
I've been loving your poetry and am honored you stopped in to read some of mine.
J.
