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discipline.



Needing to obey
Yet, deciding to misstep
for that reddened cue






Written by Bluevelvete
Published
Author's Note
for the April Senryu Theme: Discipline via The haiku-pond
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/groups/haiku-pond/discussion/4888/
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