blur my world with your submission

Excellent write PS ... love the tension between the first two lines ... the third line links to the image ... the last line echoes ... throw in the lower case ee cummings style ... along with your Bukowskiesque style ... one of my very favorites of yours ... truly ...

I'm blown away Lil
Lower case was an edit after publication  
Needed softness  
Love your comment
Made my day .....

thx

Thanks for the RL too

You are most welcome ... most deserving ...

You're awesome

Xx

Wholeheartedly agree with LDF. This is really beautiful. Packs a lot of message for the brevity and the art compliments it perfectly as usual. Great stuff.

Blown away twice in one poem
Thank you so much
Your praise means a lot to me !

Appreciate the RL !

Beautiful composition!  Not bad on the words either!

Wow, 2 comments in one
Thank you A
Means a lot !!

I love your no nonsense, this is me, PoetSpeak raw style. I always have.
As far as I'm concerned, you command this genre.

And the art is superb, too.

Telling it like I see it E
Your support has always been awesome  
Love when you come by to visit  
Xxx

My way ...

Thx BP

Beautiful and tender. Gorgeous all 'round.
✔

Sometimes it happens that way ....
Makes me happy when you like...

Thx k

There actually an understated sweetness here.
Great write.


hugs,
buddhakitty.

You might be right
See, anything is possible

Thank you kindly bk  

Truly... I love your work.  Your mind, ideas seem pretty wicked.

Beautiful comment Lj  
I appreciate them so much  
I'm a straight ahead man,  I write and paint with determination    
Very much part rogue too  
Taking the wicked as a compliment    
 
THANK YOU XX

The colors of as the painting tells story. The yellow really draws my eye to the edges. Succinct words that say a lot.

Yes, the yellow is the highlight
It needed that to draw the eyes to a focal point
Good call

Thx

I think you explained perfectly how many us feel upon being bestowed with that certain smile.

BIG LIKE.

Yes Sir
When you see that smile you just melt
You get me Wally

Thank you