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The Hunger
The door flew open
Grabbing...
Mouths locked in a passion embrace
Hands tearing off clothes
His mouth exploring her neck, breasts
Falling to her knees removing his jeans
Taking him in her mouth
Her tongue rolling around his hardness
Looking up as she played
She could feel him start, want to
Explode as his moans let her know
Pushing him onto the bed
Her cunt now riding his cock
He tensed as he started to cum
Looking into his eyes
Her mouth tasting his
As he let go
Kissing his neck Claudia sank her teeth in...
Grabbing...
Mouths locked in a passion embrace
Hands tearing off clothes
His mouth exploring her neck, breasts
Falling to her knees removing his jeans
Taking him in her mouth
Her tongue rolling around his hardness
Looking up as she played
She could feel him start, want to
Explode as his moans let her know
Pushing him onto the bed
Her cunt now riding his cock
He tensed as he started to cum
Looking into his eyes
Her mouth tasting his
As he let go
Kissing his neck Claudia sank her teeth in...
Published 1st Apr 2021
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Anonymous
1st Apr 2021 8:10pm
but but..... it's like the best/worst cliffhanger...
(says greedy Blue!)... lol 😈 I enjoyed thoroughly, my friend. This I the kind of afternoon pick-me-up that I'm talkin' 'bout....
Thank you for sharing
🌹
x
(says greedy Blue!)... lol 😈 I enjoyed thoroughly, my friend. This I the kind of afternoon pick-me-up that I'm talkin' 'bout....
Thank you for sharing
🌹
x
1st Apr 2021 10:19pm
Always leave them wanting more... : ) I did an edit after I saw your comment as I thought of my Vampir Claudia which I wrote a poem about her and posted it on here so thinking maybe more of her in the future. Glad it was a good afternoon pick me up for you.
More for greedy Blue coming up wink : )
Cheers
More for greedy Blue coming up wink : )
Cheers
2nd Apr 2021 9:08pm
Definitely left me wanting more, so eager to see what is to come. (pun intended). I feel like a Vampire theme is necessary here and maybe we will see Vampire Claudia reappear again. And in the throes of passion I can be a biter so I appreciate this even more. Enjoyed it S...
2nd Apr 2021 11:28pm
There is a poet on here that wrote a great little Vampire story here alias is SweetKittyCat5 you would enjoy it. Claudia(pronounced the Spanish way) started out as a song I wrote many years ago(revamping it and orchestrating it). Then Claudia became the beginning to an Opera I hoped to write now it is a 6 chapter story so far lol lots of erotica and violence. Love a biter in the throes of passion : )
I wrote another tune about a Vampire and this will be the theme of one of the poems to cum : )
Cheers
I wrote another tune about a Vampire and this will be the theme of one of the poems to cum : )
Cheers
