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Objectifying You
I need to do that
You want me to
Let's face it
The way you dress
The things you say and write
That's red meat for me
Almost raw
Not quite
I always say
Don't give me all
Just enough to keep me
Dazzled and on edge
We both win
You're on my pedestal
I'm in a frenzy
Give it to me
Mind fuck
I'll be back
Bend over
You want me to
Let's face it
The way you dress
The things you say and write
That's red meat for me
Almost raw
Not quite
I always say
Don't give me all
Just enough to keep me
Dazzled and on edge
We both win
You're on my pedestal
I'm in a frenzy
Give it to me
Mind fuck
I'll be back
Bend over
Author's Note
It's basic
It's me
I don't hide
I don't lie
It's me
I don't hide
I don't lie
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Re. Objectifying You
1st Apr 2021 2:31pm
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1st Apr 2021 2:42pm
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1st Apr 2021 2:45pm
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1st Apr 2021 2:52pm
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1st Apr 2021 3:34pm
I agree, eat it while you can...tomorrow may be too late...NOW!! Peace, oral
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1st Apr 2021 3:38pm
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1st Apr 2021 9:52pm
Re. Objectifying You
Those are some well put together words. I like this. I've gotten into erotic write lately.
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1st Apr 2021 3:50pm
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1st Apr 2021 4:18pm
I mean, sometimes a person
dangles the right bits in just
the right way.
“Keep me dazzled”. That’s fucking fantastic.
dangles the right bits in just
the right way.
“Keep me dazzled”. That’s fucking fantastic.
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Re: Re. Objectifying You
1st Apr 2021 4:31pm
When you can get that kind of action
Jump all over it
I live my life in Lust
ThX E
Xx
Jump all over it
I live my life in Lust
ThX E
Xx
Re. Objectifying You
Anonymous
1st Apr 2021 4:46pm
I need some hot shit written about me lol
Where the fuck is my frothing and frenzy.?
Does that tell you that I like it?
I like it LIKE THAT
Where the fuck is my frothing and frenzy.?
Does that tell you that I like it?
I like it LIKE THAT
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1st Apr 2021 4:59pm
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1st Apr 2021 7:05pm
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1st Apr 2021 7:08pm
They respond well to commands
I'm not that nice in these situations
They don't want that
They perform well to rough and ready
I'm not that nice in these situations
They don't want that
They perform well to rough and ready
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
1st Apr 2021 7:43pm
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Re: Re. Objectifying You
1st Apr 2021 7:46pm
I try to keep it tight and concise
Your style
Can you see yourself writing something like this ??
Thx BP
Your style
Can you see yourself writing something like this ??
Thx BP
Re. Objectifying You
2nd Apr 2021 9:20am
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2nd Apr 2021 12:38pm
Indeed, it's a mutual relationship of want and being wanted
If played right it can be fruitful to both ...
The key is want ...
If played right it can be fruitful to both ...
The key is want ...
Re. Objectifying You
13th Apr 2021 1:25am
That "red meat" line had me thinking of a wild lion, teased, ready to devour.
Excellent verse sir.
Excellent verse sir.
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13th Apr 2021 1:54am
I'm pretty good at this porn smut
This site needs me more smut
Tasteful of course
Thx Wally
This site needs me more smut
Tasteful of course
Thx Wally