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Spiritual Changes
Speaking with spirits.
Constantly searching for more.
Question our life path.
Knowing the veil is thinning.
Our souls are all connected.
Constantly searching for more.
Question our life path.
Knowing the veil is thinning.
Our souls are all connected.
Published 30th Mar 2021
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30th Mar 2021 11:18pm
30th Mar 2021 11:23pm
Anonymous
30th Mar 2021 11:24pm
It's thought provoking, imo. I prescribe to no faith in and only consider myself slightly spiritual in an essence. I perhaps meditate once in a while. I tend to shy away from anything that reminds me even remotely of an organized religion I like the emoting here and believe that karma is a huge driving force in the world. If you treat others how you want to be treated, then you can walk tall and because in that aspect, we ARE all connected.... Just my humble thoughts.
Terrifically penned 🙏
Warmest regards,
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xo
Terrifically penned 🙏
Warmest regards,
🌹
xo
30th Mar 2021 11:39pm
I completely agree! Organized religion freaks me out. I love just feeling things out on my own and whatever feels right to me is my truth. I meditate a lot. I meditate in complete silence. I’m often annoyed by guided meditations.
Thanks for your feed back my love.
Thanks for your feed back my love.
Anonymous
30th Mar 2021 11:41pm
PS... there's a #tanka theme!!
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just fyi!
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just fyi!
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30th Mar 2021 11:43pm
Always breaking the rules 😂😅
#nontraditionaltanka
Hahahahah I’m just messing around
#nontraditionaltanka
Hahahahah I’m just messing around
Anonymous
30th Mar 2021 11:45pm
Hee hee hee.. love it!! 👍🏻
🖕🏻the rules
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🖕🏻the rules
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31st Mar 2021 00:18am
Hey Y.O. Definitely a great contemplative write and Tanka. We are all constantly searching I think and the veil is thin indeed. Look forward to reading more. :) and welcome!
31st Mar 2021 00:20am
31st Mar 2021 00:20am
31st Mar 2021 00:20am
Yes... I’ve known a few visitors in my time. I guess we’re all just lights passing through.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
Thank you for sharing.
-M
31st Mar 2021 00:40am
Anonymous
- Edited 31st Mar 2021 7:58pm
31st Mar 2021 7:29pm
My Personal Take to the Experience of your Poem:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/414524-i-have-never-seen-such-beautiful/
"No Greater Pain then Letting' & Leaving People Behind!" Thought 'Provoking IN Regards to Oneness!
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/414524-i-have-never-seen-such-beautiful/
"No Greater Pain then Letting' & Leaving People Behind!" Thought 'Provoking IN Regards to Oneness!
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28th May 2021 2:13am
POWERFUL
Nothing's wrong with reflecting on issues
Some of the best work has had to do with people getting the best out of themselves
The human masterpiece of following the ethical moral path of the righteous
Always finding reasons to live for the service of others and not only yourself
Those come with never ending questions
Nothing's wrong with reflecting on issues
Some of the best work has had to do with people getting the best out of themselves
The human masterpiece of following the ethical moral path of the righteous
Always finding reasons to live for the service of others and not only yourself
Those come with never ending questions
