Softer Side

Ohhh... I felt pure delicious desire packed within this little piece of truly inspired sensuality!
I adored it's flow and I read it a few times.
Well done with the tastefully evocative, yet slightly dirty feel... that's difficult to convey yet some of my favorite to experience .. hahaha...

I thank you for sharing, elsiesan!
🌹
xo
-B

Thank you Bluevelvete for your lovely comment. You inspire me to write more.  

Nice.  Sensual.  Horny stuff.

Glad you like it.  

Tender 'take me'. Favourite lines:

Longing only a real man
Whose softer side
Has eyes wide open (ie men who don't go blindly in]

Yes. Thank you for your comment.

Thank you musicallymrm for the RL.  Really do appreciate it.  

Brilliant...the thirst and the longing...like a parched land seeking the first rain

Thank you kindly for your comment. You are very right.  

(After re-read) The last lines sum up enjoyable sex for many:

Pleasure gates
To a world
Longed for
Seldom achieved.

Yes, very much so and the older we get, it seems the last line has much greater significance.  

From the first line, “Make love to me like it’s the first time.”  A woman that knows what she wants! Yes! I love that boldness. This poem is Wow ! I love your “this is want I want. Give it to me.” Approach. Another classic.

Thank you for your comment.  At my age if I don't know what i want, I'd dare to say, I'm in deep trouble.  

Another poem of longing, beautifully phrased. You have a gift for getting right to the heart of the matter. Sweet!

Thank you for your comment.  Really is appreciated.

The luxury piece for the reader
     You mastered his poem and made me swim between the tones of your words
Thank you for making us feel what you wrote
I've read it many times
I read it from a man's point of view
I read it from a woman's point of view

All I can say to you is thank you for sharing your

MP

Thank you.  I'm reviewing and rereading comments on my writings.  I just saw this, thought I'd say thank you kindly for your comment.  Sounds like you felt the innate sensuality of it.  I am pleased.