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The Zen Master
The watermeadow said,
"I cannot explain to you
how I do this",
as the flowers came forth,
and their time there
was spent playing and laughing.
Published 26th Mar 2021
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26th Mar 2021 5:29am
26th Mar 2021 11:16am
Hello there.
I really liked the innocence in this piece, and how it said so much in so few words. The imagery of spring is playful, and does much to mirror the themes of zen in this poem.
I am such a sucker for these little pieces that say so much. An excellent example of brevity.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
I really liked the innocence in this piece, and how it said so much in so few words. The imagery of spring is playful, and does much to mirror the themes of zen in this poem.
I am such a sucker for these little pieces that say so much. An excellent example of brevity.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
26th Mar 2021 8:32pm
