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Liberation
The way he handles my flesh could be dubbed as borderline criminal as he elicits a sense of peace in between deep sighs upon mountain highs, whilst I quench his thirst with a cascading waterfall as he leaves me gaping and full to the brim whilst grinding upon me hard & deep.
Shattering the silence with ambient whispers as he gently thrusts harder & deeper, luxuriantly penetrating my glistening plush velvet whole until I’m gushing, worshipping the width & length of his pulsating need as he fills me repeatedly with his seed.
Until I’m dripping threefold, and his hunger intensifies the more he senses my submission as realises the potential to nourish his primal desire to fuck me as if he owns me without limitations, and the pleasure & pain bounds me to his sun-kissed being.
Laced in the intricate threads of his effervescent ebullience as his radiance swarms my being in a smidge of animalistic desire to soothe the insatiable ache that hurts so good whilst filling me simultaneously until we’re violently trembling upon one another.
And in those moments, we’re nothing but flesh & bone as my body liberates him from the underlying issues that anchor him to woes unspoken.
Shattering the silence with ambient whispers as he gently thrusts harder & deeper, luxuriantly penetrating my glistening plush velvet whole until I’m gushing, worshipping the width & length of his pulsating need as he fills me repeatedly with his seed.
Until I’m dripping threefold, and his hunger intensifies the more he senses my submission as realises the potential to nourish his primal desire to fuck me as if he owns me without limitations, and the pleasure & pain bounds me to his sun-kissed being.
Laced in the intricate threads of his effervescent ebullience as his radiance swarms my being in a smidge of animalistic desire to soothe the insatiable ache that hurts so good whilst filling me simultaneously until we’re violently trembling upon one another.
And in those moments, we’re nothing but flesh & bone as my body liberates him from the underlying issues that anchor him to woes unspoken.
Published 25th Mar 2021
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25th Mar 2021 3:27pm
25th Mar 2021 7:21pm
Bravissima, Lady Shadow❣❣ What a rich, titillating, imaginatively vivid portrait of this seminal rendez-vous. This passage cinjures such a beautiful, alluring image letting the reader do the picture work,
"luxuriantly penetrating my glistening plush velvet whole" Your use of "whole" instead of "hole" elevates the piece from animzl to transcendental.
Oh my this is one of the most exquite descriptions if ejaculation that I have ever read,
"Laced in the intricate threads of his effervescent ebullience"
And you close the piece with such a touching and, to me, wholly true passage,,
"liberates him from the underlying issues that anchor him to woes unspoken." I am truly fortunate to have read this piece.🌹
"luxuriantly penetrating my glistening plush velvet whole" Your use of "whole" instead of "hole" elevates the piece from animzl to transcendental.
Oh my this is one of the most exquite descriptions if ejaculation that I have ever read,
"Laced in the intricate threads of his effervescent ebullience"
And you close the piece with such a touching and, to me, wholly true passage,,
"liberates him from the underlying issues that anchor him to woes unspoken." I am truly fortunate to have read this piece.🌹
26th Mar 2021 00:02am
You are a dynamic force. Your command of evocative language is always immersive.
26th Mar 2021 00:13am
31st Mar 2021 9:32pm
you write very very well I can only use the simple words as I have no education
to even speak of and that is true one thing i remember most about my 1st 3 years
is the 3rd grade teacher went out of her way to make everyone learn the multiplication
of numbers and of course adding and subtraction she believed rightly so knowing
how to keep figures is very important and she learned us how to read well and that' about
really all I can remember from learning in school but we have to learn on our own any how
if we really want to know anything sorry I went on a rave...but I liked your poem
to even speak of and that is true one thing i remember most about my 1st 3 years
is the 3rd grade teacher went out of her way to make everyone learn the multiplication
of numbers and of course adding and subtraction she believed rightly so knowing
how to keep figures is very important and she learned us how to read well and that' about
really all I can remember from learning in school but we have to learn on our own any how
if we really want to know anything sorry I went on a rave...but I liked your poem
3rd Aug 2021 9:50am
Well Damn,Lady.
And to think I forgot how liberating it truly is to have someone who accepts and needs me to be comfortable in my own skin in order to really enjoy the intimate experience
Thank You
In the words of "Absence" this type connection is "symbiotic"
And to think I forgot how liberating it truly is to have someone who accepts and needs me to be comfortable in my own skin in order to really enjoy the intimate experience
Thank You
In the words of "Absence" this type connection is "symbiotic"
