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"Problems" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 16/10/2017

It’s Pretty CLEAR That ...
...... NONSENSE ....  
Causes Us ... PROBLEMS ... !!!  
  
But Some Are Caused ...  
By MORE Than Flaws ... !!!  
   
Some Are Displayed ...  
Because of Our Age ...  
   
Ya See When Young Lacking Experience ...  
Can Make Your Problems ... SERIOUS ... !!!!  
   
When Old Well Ya Know ...  
The Old Memory ... Goes ..........  
   
And That Can Cause Problems ...  
That Can’t Be Fixed By Solvents ...  
   
Or Drugs Like ... Coc’ ...  
So ....... SLOW That Roll ....  !!!  
   
Before It Takes A TOLL ...  
On Your Body And Soul ... !!!  
Like ... BROKEN Bones ...  
As Old Age GROWS ... !!!  
That CREATE HOLES  ...  
BEYOND Your Control .... !!!!!!  
   
... Some YOU CAN ....  !!!  
   
But You Have To Plan ...  
To Leave PROBLEMS DAMNED ... !!!  
BEHIND Doors You SLAM ... !!!  
   
But Problems RISE ...    
If You’re NOT WISE ... !!!  
And Choose To Live Life ...    
Using LIES As Your Guide ... !?!  
   
You See The Problem With LYING ...    
Is That It Leaves The TRUTH DYING ... !!!  
   
Which Can Be PROBLEMATIC ...  
If You Face AUTOMATICS ...  
And PROBLEMS That Are TRAGIC ... !!!  
   
Because You Couldn’t MANAGE ...  
TRUTH That Causes ... DAMAGE ... !!!  
   
To LIES That CLEARLY RAVAGE ... !!!  
MUCH More Than CANNIBAL Savage ... !!!!!  
   
You See CARELESS Acts ....  
Can Breed PROBLEMS ... !!!  
   
............. FACT ......... !!!!!  
   
Indeed ... Hollywood Clans ...  
Seem To USE Their Hands ...  
In ... " Various Acts “ ...  
   
That Cause PROBLEMS ...    
That Revolve Around SEX ... !!!!!  
And ABUSIVE Ends That Some RESENT ... !!!  
   
But Enough About THEM ...  
And Their World of Pretence ... !!!!!  
   
As I Said BEFORE ...  
PROBLEMS Come FORTH ... !!!  
When Age Resorts ...  
To Affecting Our Minds ... !!!  
   
Believe PROBLEMS RISE ...  
To The Point Where You Find ...  
That You CAN'T Memorise ... !!!!!!  
   
Poetic Designs From INTRICATE Rhymes ...  
Like These That I Write And Sometimes Recite ...    
   
It’s A Problem Designed ...  
By Old ... Father Time ... !!!  
   
Now A Lack of Vision ....    
Is A Problem Conditioned ... !!!  
   
To KEEP You Blind ...  
And UNABLE To Find ...  
A Way For Your Eyes ...  
To Retain CLEAR SIGHT ...  
When It Comes To The Plight ...  
of .... Relationship STRIFE ...  
   
ESPECIALLY When ...  
It Involves A CHILD ... !!!  
   
But Those Are Lines ...  
For Another Time ...  
   
... As Are PROBLEMS ...  
Caused By The Feds' And Governments ...    
And Nowadays YES CERTAIN Presidents ... !!!  
   
And That Right There ...  
Is Simply Where ...  
This Piece Should END.  
   
That I’ve Called ....  
   
... “ PROBLEMS “ ...

LISTEN HERE :

https://soundcloud.com/user-16569179/problems
Written by BigVirge (Big Virge)
Published | Edited 16th Jul 2021
Author's Note
We all face em' from time to time, hence, these rhymes ....
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