O' dreams of technicolor

Great poem.  Keep on writing.

haha... erhhmm.. ... it's what came, when pen to paper.... Ty for reading Francisco
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This one's a mind-bender.
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Mind bender?
I usually feel figuratively naked in how transparent my pieces seem.. lol..
.... it's just me struggling with myself and my apparent ability to fall into the same pitfalls of 'pleasing' others who, in the end didn't really want, care or see... "me"..as me.
or something along those line.... lol
Ty for reading, KP and the generous list add
I appreciate you and love it when you visit.
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-x

Great write beautiful
Sadly we all often try to please others who don't see pr give a real shit about us or who we are.
I think that's a weakness of having a open and hopeful heart
BE STRONG BE BEAUTIFUL AND BE YOU
love and light
Ron xx

Thank you
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x

Dear, Lady Blue
I love this wonderful poetic puzzle. This passage is such an effective metaphor for the power of silence,
"it's thunderous clarity"
I read this as a commentary on one who chooses superficial over substance.
"Obduracy" hmmmmm one of those sexy words. I had to look it up.😁
This passage perfectly encapsulates what I perceive as the core message,
"that's its just  
the grey matter  
that didn't matter "
Bravissima, lovely S. 🌹🐻💋🐻💋🐻

Thank you
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x

I forgot the last quote, I added it because it's my favorite passage. Gray matter is much more sexy than physical appearance.🐻💋🐻💋🐻

To very select few, like you and I maybe.... but irl, especially online, when /if you're searching for a partner...... it's apparent that it so matters.
It prevails everywhere..... here included.

Amen and ❣️❣️

Superb.
I can say no more.
Richard

You're far too kind...
Ty, my lovely friend
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xo

Well and truly spoken Susan. You're an amazing person.

I do my best, Daniel
Ty for reading, I'm appreciative 🙏
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-x

Technicolor dreams longing to escape black and white. There is nothing black and white about your poetry. You write soulfully and vibrantly with words that carry me along like an emotional white water rafting trip which exhilarates me.  

XoXoXo
John

Your descriptions give me hope and confidence in myself, John... I truly appreciate that, it means a lot to me, my friend. Thank you for the list add and all your kindness
I'm touched.
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xo
-Susan

This had a groovy feel to it, in the way you deliver this cool and laid back approach.
Great work as always Blue.

Thanks Wally
I forgot that I had a pic for this and I never put it back up.... thanks for commenting, so I could reread it(and add the pic) ... I think that I don't dislike it as much as I thought I did originally ... (I'm so terrible!!. Hahaha..) I mostly jest, methinks... lol  
Anyway,(ha!) I appreciate you reading and your insights, my friend. I'm all smiles that you grooved along with me...  

I really do appreciate you taking the time you do, Walter... it's generous and so indicative of your lovely character... (just wanted to say)  
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*added to my reply...
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line 31,32,and 33 "having my color's plume in your eyes of spirited  soul bound understanding"- wonderful.

that last full stanza "and it was always going to be  whispers of wanted technicolor  to the ear of a girl drawn"- there's a fantastic want here that keeps ringing with me and I like it. wonderful emotions pushed here.

Thank you so so much.
I'm awed by your lovely comments.
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xo