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Web of Desire
Smoldering
Moody
Wounded
Chamber
of
Desire
In
Progress
Incomplete
May
Never
Flower
Web
Complicated
Bruises
Moody
Wounded
Chamber
of
Desire
In
Progress
Incomplete
May
Never
Flower
Web
Complicated
Bruises
Author's Note
Original Gouache Painting on Cold Press Paper by Poetspeak
( a work in progress ) 13" x 17"
( a work in progress ) 13" x 17"
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Re. Web of Desire
22nd Mar 2021 1:54pm
Re: Re. Web of Desire
22nd Mar 2021 2:12pm
Many thanks for the high praise Lil
I've always looked at BRAVO in the BIG LIKE category so when I see it applied to me, it makes me very happy !!
I've always looked at BRAVO in the BIG LIKE category so when I see it applied to me, it makes me very happy !!
Re. Web of Desire
22nd Mar 2021 3:10pm
Never stop building the Chamber of Desire. If you stop then life would be mundane and boring. Sometimes it's better to keep trying to make things flower than to have them flower and die. The picture is perfect, reminds me of flowers and also a web with some bruising mixed in also. Another amazing combination of art.
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Re: Re. Web of Desire
22nd Mar 2021 3:51pm
Love the comment
Makes so much sense and imparts a lot of what I was thinking about when writing ...
Thanks for the RL award too, made my day
Makes so much sense and imparts a lot of what I was thinking about when writing ...
Thanks for the RL award too, made my day
Re. Web of Desire
Anonymous
22nd Mar 2021 3:15pm
Those first three words, slap me in the mind.
Chamber of desire - heart shaped box is what came to mind, random info.
Painting: I enjoy the pops of blue, vermilion and purple behind the muted falls shades. Feels exactly like a complicated web of bruises.
Chamber of desire - heart shaped box is what came to mind, random info.
Painting: I enjoy the pops of blue, vermilion and purple behind the muted falls shades. Feels exactly like a complicated web of bruises.
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Re: Re. Web of Desire
22nd Mar 2021 3:53pm
New paints showed up a few days ago
A lot of them fit in my brain jar of exquisite vision of life on the edge ....
Thanks Rachael
Appreciate the great comment
A lot of them fit in my brain jar of exquisite vision of life on the edge ....
Thanks Rachael
Appreciate the great comment
Re. Web of Desire
22nd Mar 2021 3:31pm
I really like that placement of blue, Poet. It anchors what seemingly floats.
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Re: Re. Web of Desire
22nd Mar 2021 3:55pm
The blue is the elephant in the room on this painting
You're right, it is anchor of this painting, hold true while the rest spins out a bit
Great comment - BIG LIKE
Thx A
You're right, it is anchor of this painting, hold true while the rest spins out a bit
Great comment - BIG LIKE
Thx A
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22nd Mar 2021 5:03pm
Re. Web of Desire
29th Mar 2021 11:22pm
These lines of threes not only feel clear but enigmatic (to me).
Really liked this one.
Really liked this one.
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29th Mar 2021 11:25pm