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[ DUP ] Bend it like Kozak
---break Poe'treed rules
as if o'pined limbs
as if your Mother's back
( but not your Dada's - him's
been ruled an exception, being
the most exceptional of fools )
by stomping on every sidewalk
crack Crack CRACK
not a'bothered with keeping track
of duh merits
you
rack
up
yourself
on a bicycle rack
because you were too
busy having a ball [ or two ]
now turned black and blue
as if o'pined limbs
as if your Mother's back
( but not your Dada's - him's
been ruled an exception, being
the most exceptional of fools )
by stomping on every sidewalk
crack Crack CRACK
not a'bothered with keeping track
of duh merits
you
rack
up
yourself
on a bicycle rack
because you were too
busy having a ball [ or two ]
now turned black and blue
Published 21st Mar 2021
| Edited 24th Oct 2021
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2nd Apr 2021 11:08pm
You got tight prosody to your chops Johnny. Some of your work would sound smooth over some Miles Davis
3rd Apr 2021 9:24am
Given I was trying to write in Danny's style, I will share the compliment with him. Thank you muchly, Loki!
