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Affairs of the Heart
These kinds of relationships work better
When you're attached
You're the extra piece of pie
I'm the drink you shouldn't have
Everyone needs something to lose
Except this time it's a gain
When you're attached
You're the extra piece of pie
I'm the drink you shouldn't have
Everyone needs something to lose
Except this time it's a gain
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Key Lime sublime with a Tubi 80 chaser
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Re. Affairs of the Heart
20th Mar 2021 4:38am
I like the “you’re the extra piece of pie / I’m the drink you shouldn’t have.”
That part could be the poem all in its own. Well done.
That part could be the poem all in its own. Well done.
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20th Mar 2021 10:28am
I've been studying these relationships for years
I read a lot of Raymond Carver back in the day
Might explain it ....
Thanks Daisy
I read a lot of Raymond Carver back in the day
Might explain it ....
Thanks Daisy
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