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much like the shameless sun
which sets withought the slightest twinge of remorse
you shall press hearts like spring flowers
in a book, steadily decorating its chapters
at most a glimmer of color
your only farewell
18th Mar 2021
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should be writing an essay but . . . playing with words
art by me <3
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18th Mar 2021 8:15pm
Dear Umm, many months separate your poems and they are always worth the wait. This is beautiful poem. I love the relationship you created between the Sun's color dives in below the horizon and the colorful flowers disappearing in a books pages. I love this passage,
"ste(a)dily decorating its chapters"
I see that as a lifetime of colorful experiences saved in the pages of life's book
Bravissima, Goddess ❣️❣️ 🌹
Read poems by Gahddess_Worship
- Edited 19th Mar 2021 12:06pm
18th Mar 2021 8:33pm
Your imagery propels the intimacy felt, in this beautifully tender write. It's so lovely and visceral. I love your artwork it ties it together so perfectly.
I'm glad I came across reading this today
and I thank you for sharing,
Read poems by Bluevelvete
18th Mar 2021 9:39pm
"much like the shameless sun
which sets without the slightest twinge of remorse..."
That is a great.
Enjoyed this poem.
Read poems by javalini
19th Mar 2021 1:08am
I liked the other title too. terms of the form I think there’s a technique in the art world where strokes are layered atop each other, I think consciously or subconsciously you’ve kinda done something similar here
must agree with Bluevelvet above, you paint a vivid picture with your words. I hope you’re ok
well done with this one
Read poems by lepperochan
(Francisco J Vera)
19th Mar 2021 3:24am
You bid farewell to love when it dies then you get up on the horse to find love again. Keep on writing.
Read poems by Phantom2426
(The Fire Elemental)
19th Mar 2021 5:03pm
I messaged you yesterday kind of on a whim, without knowing you had posted something. Rather poignant image in its focused brevity, with a subtle nuance of feeling and presence of time. Nice work.
Read poems by DanielChristensen
11th Apr 2021 4:25pm
The sun is a powerful means to life. It watches over us, keeps us warm, and lights our way.
This seems to be how the subject (the person not the books deviding points - ha) is perceived here - as someone with knowledge or guidence.
And yet, there is no dedication of fanfare I perceive. No real goodbyes. Sometimes it just goes that way until many years later.
Poe was never really big until years later. That's the feel I get out of this.
Nice one, Umm. 😁
Read poems by Relic-54
23rd Apr 2021 10:07pm
Your play on words is intriguing. Hugs and peace, Oral
Read poems by TheOralizer
25th Apr 2021 3:10am
What more do you want, Umm? At least enjoy the sun's afterglow. ;-)
Read poems by Billy_Snagg
22nd May 2021 7:26pm
Good ol' Umm. 😁 When my mother died we found a book with old flowers put on the inside chapters. This reminded me very much of that. Nice poem and great art work. 🌺
Read poems by Timagination543
5th Jun 2021 3:42pm
This is beautiful artwork accompanied a well written piece.
Read poems by Laluma
Re: Re. 18/03/2021
5th Jun 2021 3:49pm
Thank you Laluma <3
Read poems by Umm
- Edited 6th Jun 2021 8:07am
6th Jun 2021 8:05am
reads like a brief farewell. Totally intrigued with the title. I making a reference to a person which may not be your original intent.
Read poems by JAZZMANOR
7th Jun 2021 7:45pm
very well done, i enjoyed this one
Read poems by BeginningPoet
12th Jun 2021 11:18am
Keep it up!👍👌✌️
Read poems by rainy_day13
(silent lotus .)
15th Aug 2021 11:46am
If I was a sunflower
And you were the sun
I'd refuse to bloom
it's interesting how your inkwell threads
Read poems by silent_lotus
- Edited 20th Nov 2021 4:45pm
29th Oct 2021 5:23pm
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