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a theory of possible sanguinity.
These walls
are not sacred
nor under watch
from mayors or thieves
.. and that's as it should be.
We are ours,
We, protectors of self
and deed
of the holiest
regard and care
In times
of unexpected
is where
worth and value
are spotlit
Those who do,
become Jade or Pearl
in an innate
of obvious rare goodness
the kind that words can't find
Plain in sight,
a beauty in such apparent
of each whisper
each beckon
each call,
to be better than...
It's when those times
are challenged
to be colored; shaded
in a hue of everything open
and seen
There's the point,
that we ALL are ours
full of noble sunshine,
lustrous hope
and a need to plant seeds,
to watch them grow—
into a life of storied pride,
paying forward in sustenance
and all that is promised air.
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 18th Mar 2021
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© Blu2021
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Re. a theory of possible sanguinity.
18th Mar 2021 10:08am
sanguinity is such a lovely word to use. "protectors of self" that is very true.
Great poetry, friend.
Great poetry, friend.
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Re: Re. a theory of possible sanguinity.
18th Mar 2021 10:14am
Thank you for reading and your thoughtful remarks, DC.... Yeah... that's exactly right. I think if people focused more on their own shit vs others... we'd all be a happier people.... just a thought.
Glad you enjoyed reading and I deeply appreciate the list add
Much love,
🌹
x
Glad you enjoyed reading and I deeply appreciate the list add
Much love,
🌹
x
Re. a theory of possible sanguinity.
Anonymous
18th Mar 2021 10:34am
Y’know... I’ve recently become totally obsessed with my little garden. It was overgrown, full of weeds, dilapidated. The more I think about it, the more I realise it was a direct reflection of how I felt about myself.
A month ago, I randomly started cutting the hedge.. and it felt good. Then everyday for the last month I’ve worked on it — clearing, trimming, painting, building, allowing. It’s starting to look so good now. In fact I don’t think it’s looked that good, ever.
My point is, we are what we channel ourselves and our energy into. There is a part of me that is so over being angry or feeling bad about myself. The more I focus on improving my life, the more I realise that the other stuff... well... it don’t matter a diamond studded shit.
You have a gift. A gift that sees the beautiful ordinary, and that’s something I always have time for.
“ We are ours,
We, protectors of self
and deed
of the holiest
regard and care”
That’s all that matters.
-M
A month ago, I randomly started cutting the hedge.. and it felt good. Then everyday for the last month I’ve worked on it — clearing, trimming, painting, building, allowing. It’s starting to look so good now. In fact I don’t think it’s looked that good, ever.
My point is, we are what we channel ourselves and our energy into. There is a part of me that is so over being angry or feeling bad about myself. The more I focus on improving my life, the more I realise that the other stuff... well... it don’t matter a diamond studded shit.
You have a gift. A gift that sees the beautiful ordinary, and that’s something I always have time for.
“ We are ours,
We, protectors of self
and deed
of the holiest
regard and care”
That’s all that matters.
-M
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Re: Re. a theory of possible sanguinity.
18th Mar 2021 11:08am
Ohh my, this is a lovely comment, Missy. ;)
Firstly, when it's all said and done (or close to) please post a picture of your garden. It's been inspiring to read about your progress and the true value and appreciation you have developed. I too, cherish the physical results that you see after the love of toiling!!... - just a small request! -
You're absolutely correct in saying that we are what we choose to funnel our energy into or at the very least we are greatly affected by it. It's my own inner demons that tend to harp and I know that once I take a decent breath that I can realign and right my own ship. It's a learned process that I can now better navigate with years behind me.
... and it puts me on my path to keep all the fucks I give, for me and the real important stuff.
Thank you for the compliment and the time you spent, it's not taken for granted, my friend
I appreciate the generous list add and all your thoughts shared..
Enjoy the day ahead,
🌹
xo
-B
Firstly, when it's all said and done (or close to) please post a picture of your garden. It's been inspiring to read about your progress and the true value and appreciation you have developed. I too, cherish the physical results that you see after the love of toiling!!... - just a small request! -
You're absolutely correct in saying that we are what we choose to funnel our energy into or at the very least we are greatly affected by it. It's my own inner demons that tend to harp and I know that once I take a decent breath that I can realign and right my own ship. It's a learned process that I can now better navigate with years behind me.
... and it puts me on my path to keep all the fucks I give, for me and the real important stuff.
Thank you for the compliment and the time you spent, it's not taken for granted, my friend
I appreciate the generous list add and all your thoughts shared..
Enjoy the day ahead,
🌹
xo
-B
Re. a theory of possible sanguinity.
18th Mar 2021 11:37am
You are aa beautiful with words as you are with your kindness, caring and compassion
Absolutely gorgeous
Lovely write poetess
Love and light
Ron xx
Absolutely gorgeous
Lovely write poetess
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. a theory of possible sanguinity.
18th Mar 2021 12:15pm
You're extremely kind, my lovely friend
Ty for reading and your comments that made me blush. I enjoy being a number one, btw and you saying that made me smile wide 😁<----me
I appreciate you, Ron
More than you know.
Much love from across the pond,
🌹
xo
Ty for reading and your comments that made me blush. I enjoy being a number one, btw and you saying that made me smile wide 😁<----me
I appreciate you, Ron
More than you know.
Much love from across the pond,
🌹
xo
Re. a theory of possible sanguinity.
18th Mar 2021 5:11pm
Beautiful verse, Lady Blue❣️❣️ Your words bring focus to our innate better natures. I believe that we all, no matter how badly we have, even the cruelest of humans have a spark of innate, inherited goodness.
I love how you describe the precious relationships we have in life,
"become Jade or Pearl
in an innate
of obvious rare goodness"
That universal goodness is reemphasized with this beautiful passage,
"that we ALL are ours
full of noble sunshine,
lustrous hope"
Thank you so much for this day of 🙏🌹Bravissima, dulce BB🐻💋🐻💋🐻
I love how you describe the precious relationships we have in life,
"become Jade or Pearl
in an innate
of obvious rare goodness"
That universal goodness is reemphasized with this beautiful passage,
"that we ALL are ours
full of noble sunshine,
lustrous hope"
Thank you so much for this day of 🙏🌹Bravissima, dulce BB🐻💋🐻💋🐻
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Re: Re. a theory of possible sanguinity.
18th Mar 2021 5:24pm
You're a beacon BB and one of the best voices of reason and 'telling you like it is' that a person could have the good fortune of knowing.
I think that my insecurities mixed with frustration of knowing a simple truth that others are blinded to, stopped my ability to function properly. That obviously wouldn't and couldn't do. I do believe that goodness is possibly innate in ALMOST everyone, (sociopaths narcissists and psychopaths excluded, me thinks) perhaps buried way way way more deeply in some....😂
I wholeheartedly thank you for reading and taking the time you do to leave your detailed feedback. It's always so helpful to read, allowing me to understand better my own feelings based upon how I was able to emote (if I was even able to!)
Much love and respect my dear :)
🌹
xo
BB
I think that my insecurities mixed with frustration of knowing a simple truth that others are blinded to, stopped my ability to function properly. That obviously wouldn't and couldn't do. I do believe that goodness is possibly innate in ALMOST everyone, (sociopaths narcissists and psychopaths excluded, me thinks) perhaps buried way way way more deeply in some....😂
I wholeheartedly thank you for reading and taking the time you do to leave your detailed feedback. It's always so helpful to read, allowing me to understand better my own feelings based upon how I was able to emote (if I was even able to!)
Much love and respect my dear :)
🌹
xo
BB
Re: Re. a theory of possible sanguinity.
18th Mar 2021 5:34pm
Re: Re. a theory of possible sanguinity.
18th Mar 2021 5:38pm
I'm not so sure about that... but I do know I DEFINITELY need to expel my attempts at poetic meanderings... to purge is paramount. For good or ill... 🤷🏻♀️
🌹 🐻 🐰 🍃
💜-xo
🌹 🐻 🐰 🍃
💜-xo
Re. a theory of possible sanguinity.
18th Mar 2021 6:43pm
a little haiku response
whisper of beauty
the noble heart does offer
its love for a kiss
whisper of beauty
the noble heart does offer
its love for a kiss
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Re: Re. a theory of possible sanguinity.
18th Mar 2021 6:49pm
Ohhhh (squeeeee!!!)
Omg.... a truly exquisite haiku comment
swoony swoon, me thinks... lol
Ty my dear friend
It's just what the Dr ordered.
My cup runneth over
xoxo
B
Omg.... a truly exquisite haiku comment
swoony swoon, me thinks... lol
Ty my dear friend
It's just what the Dr ordered.
My cup runneth over
xoxo
B
Re. a theory of possible sanguinity.
Re: Re. a theory of possible sanguinity.
19th Mar 2021 3:16am
Re. a theory of possible sanguinity.
19th Mar 2021 10:47am
Breathe deeply then and plant your seeds liberally ... Lovely write ... bless and love ... .
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Re: Re. a theory of possible sanguinity.
19th Mar 2021 11:47am
Dearest FeNyX,
Your words are astute and wise, my friend. I'm so appreciative of your visit and very happy to see you this morning ✨
Thank you for those thoughtful remarks I will heed them, without a doubt.
Be well and enjoy your day ☀
Much love and returned hugs,
🌹
xo
Your words are astute and wise, my friend. I'm so appreciative of your visit and very happy to see you this morning ✨
Thank you for those thoughtful remarks I will heed them, without a doubt.
Be well and enjoy your day ☀
Much love and returned hugs,
🌹
xo
Re. a theory of possible sanguinity.
19th Mar 2021 5:09pm
Opening grabs me with its direct address, philosophical monologue with a sense of poignancy about it. It has that eloquence of classic literature, rendered with an organic intimacy in proportional equipoise. Captivating work.
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Re: Re. a theory of possible sanguinity.
19th Mar 2021 6:42pm
I don't think myself or my writing has every been called captivating before (🤷🏻♀️ I don't recall) and I'm kind of in a wee bit of awe by that sentiment, wow!
I really enjoyed the 'organic intimacy' feedback, that's good to know. I very humbly thank you for such awesomely unique comments, Daniel. I appreciate you, the generous list add and the thoughtfulness in all your visits.
Much love and appreciation,
🌹
xo
I really enjoyed the 'organic intimacy' feedback, that's good to know. I very humbly thank you for such awesomely unique comments, Daniel. I appreciate you, the generous list add and the thoughtfulness in all your visits.
Much love and appreciation,
🌹
xo
Re. a theory of possible sanguinity.
22nd Mar 2021 10:17pm
So let's treat our bodies like a sacred temple and decorate nicely.
Great verse Blue!
Great verse Blue!
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