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Still Fighting
Half lidded salutations
Raspy whispers from outside my body
I'm going through the motions
Arguing with this weight on my back
And my angels have given up
While my demons lovingly promise
To be there when I fall
Raspy whispers from outside my body
I'm going through the motions
Arguing with this weight on my back
And my angels have given up
While my demons lovingly promise
To be there when I fall
Published 17th Mar 2021
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17th Mar 2021 2:07pm
I liked the brevity of this piece.
I think it explored the idea of that the things we crave are not always good for us rather well. Thank you for sharing.
-M
I think it explored the idea of that the things we crave are not always good for us rather well. Thank you for sharing.
-M
18th Mar 2021 2:02am
Then keep on fighting to get to the good side, I believe in you. Keep on writing.
18th Mar 2021 7:57pm
19th Mar 2021 5:25am
20th Mar 2021 3:32pm
Laugh at demons.
For they are weak..
And you are not..
May love guide you out💚
For they are weak..
And you are not..
May love guide you out💚
