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Crystal Darkness
Hey Fuck Bag
Yeah you
I'm talking to you
Don't worry I'm not going to reprimand you today
I don't have time for that anymore
Crystal Darkness is in town
Short skirt in 30 degree weather
Black boots up to her nirvana
Her ass like a stone mountain
Do your own fucking math
This isn't poetry
It's a 3 day pass that robs your senses
Mayhem in your loins
The whip smacking hard
Ribbons of redemption
Hers and mine
Plenty of harm, who needs sunshine
Yeah you
I'm talking to you
Don't worry I'm not going to reprimand you today
I don't have time for that anymore
Crystal Darkness is in town
Short skirt in 30 degree weather
Black boots up to her nirvana
Her ass like a stone mountain
Do your own fucking math
This isn't poetry
It's a 3 day pass that robs your senses
Mayhem in your loins
The whip smacking hard
Ribbons of redemption
Hers and mine
Plenty of harm, who needs sunshine
Author's Note
Original Digital Image by Poetspeak
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Re. It's not Sex, Its BIGGER THAN THAT
16th Mar 2021 11:24pm
Is it wrong that I adore the fact that you began this whole thing with "Hey Fuck Bag"
I mean...it commands attention.
I mean...it commands attention.
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Re: Re. It's not Sex, Its BIGGER THAN THAT
16th Mar 2021 11:35pm
Sometimes I have trouble with salutations so I just go for humor
I've written a few of these "Hey Fuck Bag" jobs and our dear poets seem to like them
I appreciate the nod E
Trying to keep it real ....
Thx
Xxx
I've written a few of these "Hey Fuck Bag" jobs and our dear poets seem to like them
I appreciate the nod E
Trying to keep it real ....
Thx
Xxx
Re. It's not Sex, Its BIGGER THAN THAT
17th Mar 2021 00:20am
Poetspeak leaving his MARK with the crack of his thrashing words...masterful write!
Careful brother at first it all starts with a simple pulled hamstring and before you know it, you need a Whip Replacement, lol.
Dynamic Digital Original is STRIKING too..Whhh-Tch, crack!
Careful brother at first it all starts with a simple pulled hamstring and before you know it, you need a Whip Replacement, lol.
Dynamic Digital Original is STRIKING too..Whhh-Tch, crack!
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Re: Re. It's not Sex, Its BIGGER THAN THAT
17th Mar 2021 00:31am
I'm a city guy as you know, we repair fast or play injured
Yeah, I'm pretty amped up with Crystal Darkness here
What a ride
Stay tuned for more updates
Thx on the art as always
Playing power forward in my mind
Yeah, I'm pretty amped up with Crystal Darkness here
What a ride
Stay tuned for more updates
Thx on the art as always
Playing power forward in my mind
Anonymous
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17th Mar 2021 00:52am
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Re: Re. It's not Sex, Its BIGGER THAN THAT
17th Mar 2021 1:02am
Re. It's not Sex, Its BIGGER THAN THAT
17th Mar 2021 2:34pm
oOF! That image though! It's like a celebration and complements the title perfectly! I snickered at the beginning line!
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Re: Re. It's not Sex, Its BIGGER THAN THAT
17th Mar 2021 2:44pm
You know you have to keep this flock in line
I have no problems with disciplining
Fun digital art, took 5 minutes, would take much longer to do the real deal ...
Thx for your support !!
I have no problems with disciplining
Fun digital art, took 5 minutes, would take much longer to do the real deal ...
Thx for your support !!
Re. Crystal Darkness
Anonymous
19th Mar 2021 10:46pm
Fuck bags ahoy! I need more fuck bags in my life. I just like typing that. Fuck bags. FUCK BAGSsssssss.
Crystal Darkness is such a great stripper name.
Crystal Darkness is such a great stripper name.
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Re: Re. Crystal Darkness
19th Mar 2021 10:54pm
You have a point on the name and occupation....
I always think of you Rachael when I write these knowing you love the "fuck bag aura" ....
BIG THANKS
I always think of you Rachael when I write these knowing you love the "fuck bag aura" ....
BIG THANKS
Re. Crystal Darkness
20th Mar 2021 7:49pm
Oh that mayhem is sure to be a wild time.
Not sure why I thought this transported me to somewhere in time, 70's maybe, the short skirt, boots?
Great write.
Not sure why I thought this transported me to somewhere in time, 70's maybe, the short skirt, boots?
Great write.
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Re: Re. Crystal Darkness
20th Mar 2021 8:54pm
Yeah, it has that feel to it
I get it
Super fly....
Just having fun mostly
Crystal might become one of my characters, who know
Thx W
I get it
Super fly....
Just having fun mostly
Crystal might become one of my characters, who know
Thx W