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you were supposed to be my landing place
My heart tumbles and falls
Hurtling through the pit where we were tossed
But never quite hitting the bottom.
The earth opened her mouth
And swallowed me when I took that leap of faith.
There's nothing quite so sweet
As the feeling of my chest bursting
Oozing hot pools of heartache
Where you finger fucked my softest places
And made me lick it from your fingers.
The tantrums we throw and the ill made promises we make
Do horrid dances on the shelf
As I sit alone in my room
Willing it all to go away.
Hurtling through the pit where we were tossed
But never quite hitting the bottom.
The earth opened her mouth
And swallowed me when I took that leap of faith.
There's nothing quite so sweet
As the feeling of my chest bursting
Oozing hot pools of heartache
Where you finger fucked my softest places
And made me lick it from your fingers.
The tantrums we throw and the ill made promises we make
Do horrid dances on the shelf
As I sit alone in my room
Willing it all to go away.
Published 16th Mar 2021
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Anonymous
16th Mar 2021 1:16pm
Damn, kitty.
I feel the steam still coming off, from this searing.... I almost feel a catharsis in reading , so letting this rip through the universe, I'm hoping had to feel good on some level. It's your word choices that leave me with my mouth agape and feeling like I wish I could purge with such perfect precision. Like a surgeon, ffs.... It's an awesome rare talent.
I am also so very sorry and empathetic for you having these feelings to begin with, yet I'm grateful for your masterful skill at writing it out....I hear you.
Ty for sharing
(hopefully I didn't spew my fan girl too too badly... lol)
Warmest regards,
🌹
-B
I feel the steam still coming off, from this searing.... I almost feel a catharsis in reading , so letting this rip through the universe, I'm hoping had to feel good on some level. It's your word choices that leave me with my mouth agape and feeling like I wish I could purge with such perfect precision. Like a surgeon, ffs.... It's an awesome rare talent.
I am also so very sorry and empathetic for you having these feelings to begin with, yet I'm grateful for your masterful skill at writing it out....I hear you.
Ty for sharing
(hopefully I didn't spew my fan girl too too badly... lol)
Warmest regards,
🌹
-B
17th Mar 2021 2:56am
Memories of Love and Heartbreak. It takes time to heal. You need to get up and try again to find love. Keep on writing.
