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life has its death
a kiss has
tongue and teeth
just waiting
underneath
and like the
rose its
thorns
the milch cow has its horns
life has its death
in every breath
the bouquet has
its wreath.
© Copyright 2021 March 13
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
tongue and teeth
just waiting
underneath
and like the
rose its
thorns
the milch cow has its horns
life has its death
in every breath
the bouquet has
its wreath.
© Copyright 2021 March 13
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
Published 15th Mar 2021
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Anonymous
- Edited 8th Apr 2021 8:45am
15th Mar 2021 4:11am
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15th Mar 2021 4:21am
Much appreciated, Hoogwauts!
Thanks for stopping by and being the very first to read this post.
Are you planning to enter the visual poetry competition, "Betrayal"?
cab
Thanks for stopping by and being the very first to read this post.
Are you planning to enter the visual poetry competition, "Betrayal"?
cab
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Apr 2021 8:45am
15th Mar 2021 4:25am
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15th Mar 2021 5:20am
15th Mar 2021 7:02am
that’s exactly what someone with a disguised dagger beneath their smile would say 😅 i like this one, but i am not sure i understand the significance of the milky cow
15th Mar 2021 11:47am
Have faith...
...in your enemy!
😉
For the milch cow with the horns, it's like saying the hands that rock the cradle can also betray the innocent.
[A milch cow is one reserved for its milk.]
Thanks for taking the time to stir a conversation.
Sincerely
cab
...in your enemy!
😉
For the milch cow with the horns, it's like saying the hands that rock the cradle can also betray the innocent.
[A milch cow is one reserved for its milk.]
Thanks for taking the time to stir a conversation.
Sincerely
cab
15th Mar 2021 11:52am
ah that makes sense, i was Beijing the cow through an Irish symbolism lens and so i should have got that but somehow i didn’t
imo it’s the example that makes the poem stand out, the rest seems built around it x
imo it’s the example that makes the poem stand out, the rest seems built around it x
ah that makes sense, i was viewing* ahaha the cow through an Irish symbolism lens and so i should have got that but somehow i didn’t
imo it’s the example that makes the poem stand out, the rest seems built around it x
imo it’s the example that makes the poem stand out, the rest seems built around it x
15th Mar 2021 4:55pm
16th Mar 2021 4:14pm
Thank you, Ahavati.
The cow-that-gives-milk having horns had never occurred to me as a parallel with rose-and-thorns until after I had typed it.
Thanks for the R/L.
Sincerely
cab
The cow-that-gives-milk having horns had never occurred to me as a parallel with rose-and-thorns until after I had typed it.
Thanks for the R/L.
Sincerely
cab
