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She Always Knows When to Drive Me
If I get to sweet
That's dangerous
Recede
Back to the violence we made famous
She's the artist
In the midnight blackness
I stole her color once
That was a mistake
I pay now
She keeps the need honest
That's dangerous
Recede
Back to the violence we made famous
She's the artist
In the midnight blackness
I stole her color once
That was a mistake
I pay now
She keeps the need honest
Published 12th Mar 2021
Author's Note
Honesty amongst thieves ....
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13th Mar 2021 6:41am
Dear PS,
Good on her for cracking the code. Great job in creating an urgency and quick meter in this poem. For me, there was an under current of agitated need trying to be quelled. Or, that may have been me projecting...yeah that was probably it. Great read.
H🌷
Good on her for cracking the code. Great job in creating an urgency and quick meter in this poem. For me, there was an under current of agitated need trying to be quelled. Or, that may have been me projecting...yeah that was probably it. Great read.
H🌷
13th Mar 2021 12:27pm
Good morning H
This is a mixed bag esoteric. Kind of poem
I had a lot of thoughts going on and merged them
Appreciate your comment H
Thx
This is a mixed bag esoteric. Kind of poem
I had a lot of thoughts going on and merged them
Appreciate your comment H
Thx
15th Mar 2021 2:58pm
15th Mar 2021 3:04pm
Appreciate it Wally
Here's the sequel with the amazing KristinaX
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/413171-art-in-tense-feelings---with-kristinax/
Here's the sequel with the amazing KristinaX
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/413171-art-in-tense-feelings---with-kristinax/
Anonymous
22nd Mar 2021 11:43pm
Very interesting!! I really like how you said so much with so few words!!
22nd Mar 2021 11:45pm
Thank you !
It's kind of my style, more with less
Nothing wasted
Appreciate the read ...
It's kind of my style, more with less
Nothing wasted
Appreciate the read ...
