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He tied her up tight
For his pleasure and hers too
The look in her eyes
For his pleasure and hers too
The look in her eyes
Published 12th Mar 2021
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12th Mar 2021 5:41pm
look at you writing haiku!
or senryu. whatever it is.
if it was me, i would be tempted to switch the first and third line around. so that it reads:
The look in her eyes
For his pleasure and hers too
He tied her up tight
but even as it is, it's a nice little write. well done!
or senryu. whatever it is.
if it was me, i would be tempted to switch the first and third line around. so that it reads:
The look in her eyes
For his pleasure and hers too
He tied her up tight
but even as it is, it's a nice little write. well done!
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13th Mar 2021 5:00pm
she has been told she
is quite good at that; but, with
mouth full, says nothing
is quite good at that; but, with
mouth full, says nothing
13th Mar 2021 5:04pm
13th Mar 2021 5:58pm
It seems a few people are starting to play around with Haiku, Senryu, and Tankas? Well, I mean, a handful of the poets I follow I mean, out of the 40 or so? It's cool. I myself just wrote to 2 tankas that I plan on posting later. I will blame Remy, not blame... thank! lol. I can't wait to see more PoetSpeak.
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13th Mar 2021 6:13pm
I'm not big on rules Lj but I'm trying a little harder
Glad you like
I like your new avatar a lot, you have expressive eyes ...
Thx
Glad you like
I like your new avatar a lot, you have expressive eyes ...
Thx
13th Mar 2021 6:21pm
Thanks PoetSpeak.
I myself never really wrote with rules until a couple of months ago, it was rhyme and free verse. Honestly, someone on here wrote pretty cool Triolet, her excitement sent me on a mission. I decided I want to feel that joy for my work so I set out and find a structure that interested me, I found the Rondeau. This is the poem that changed my writing world. Haven't written the same ever since I love it.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/409647-paradox/
I myself never really wrote with rules until a couple of months ago, it was rhyme and free verse. Honestly, someone on here wrote pretty cool Triolet, her excitement sent me on a mission. I decided I want to feel that joy for my work so I set out and find a structure that interested me, I found the Rondeau. This is the poem that changed my writing world. Haven't written the same ever since I love it.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/409647-paradox/
13th Mar 2021 6:34pm
Yes, that is a wonderful dark poem
I've been influenced lately and try to write more darkness
Thank you Lj
I've been influenced lately and try to write more darkness
Thank you Lj
