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Under Cover
Busy chasing what you want
Forgotten what you need
Waste your Time with me
Savor carnal deeds
Denial of desire
A lonely fruitless point
Like raping Mother Nature
And asking God to Join
You can't rip open wounds
That haven't stopped bleeding
But you can choose to Love a Hate
That refuses to stop seething
Suffering in Silence
Until a scream is the only choice
Lean in closely now
Primal edge adorns my voice
Purged of all our Demons
Cast repression to the floor
Sacrificial Flesh
Offered times before
Sprinkle dust from 1,000 broken hearts
Into a single night of lies
Yearning just to Dream
Cuz you see Me when you close your eyes
Riding out a Grudge
That neither one of us conceived
Loving so Tough
You just can't Believe
I'm ripping God outta your head
And replacing Him with Me
Roll you over in the dark
Until your Blind eyes can See
Take me under cover
Stifle all my screams
Make me say your name
Make me beg you, please
Elevated rapture
Satisfied release
Let me control your hunger
Hold you between my teeth
Inhale you…
Until my throat goes numb
Catch a scream & hold it
On my Ravenous tongue
Burn my lips into your chest
Scratch my name into your back
Sucking Bliss from fingertips
Then you can bounce out the back
Forgotten what you need
Waste your Time with me
Savor carnal deeds
Denial of desire
A lonely fruitless point
Like raping Mother Nature
And asking God to Join
You can't rip open wounds
That haven't stopped bleeding
But you can choose to Love a Hate
That refuses to stop seething
Suffering in Silence
Until a scream is the only choice
Lean in closely now
Primal edge adorns my voice
Purged of all our Demons
Cast repression to the floor
Sacrificial Flesh
Offered times before
Sprinkle dust from 1,000 broken hearts
Into a single night of lies
Yearning just to Dream
Cuz you see Me when you close your eyes
Riding out a Grudge
That neither one of us conceived
Loving so Tough
You just can't Believe
I'm ripping God outta your head
And replacing Him with Me
Roll you over in the dark
Until your Blind eyes can See
Take me under cover
Stifle all my screams
Make me say your name
Make me beg you, please
Elevated rapture
Satisfied release
Let me control your hunger
Hold you between my teeth
Inhale you…
Until my throat goes numb
Catch a scream & hold it
On my Ravenous tongue
Burn my lips into your chest
Scratch my name into your back
Sucking Bliss from fingertips
Then you can bounce out the back
Author's Note
Frankenstein piece. Category doesn't fit for me, but I wanted this one finished so that I can avoid another block and move on to other pieces. I envy the prolific writer.
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10th Mar 2021 4:33pm
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10th Mar 2021 11:07pm
"Sprinkle dust from 1,000 broken hearts
Into a single night of lies"
We simply love this piece, this is indeed a beautiful piece, mot about the flow but the release. Super tight Lady
Into a single night of lies"
We simply love this piece, this is indeed a beautiful piece, mot about the flow but the release. Super tight Lady
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11th Mar 2021 2:49am
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11th Mar 2021 00:49am
Bounce out the back? Is that out into the back garden, perhaps? This poem has a nice rhythm & intensity about it. Don't worry about the prolific writer unless they're getting paid!
I have those similar thoughts however.
I have those similar thoughts however.
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Garden? Sure. As long as they don't linger in my roses 😆 Thanks, Snaggy.
And yes! So many of you are able to pull so much, I will sometimes dwell on mine for ages. Like this one. Bits and pieces. Or the times when I wake up and have one explode from my pen that wasn't already being written. Those are always my favorites.
And yes! So many of you are able to pull so much, I will sometimes dwell on mine for ages. Like this one. Bits and pieces. Or the times when I wake up and have one explode from my pen that wasn't already being written. Those are always my favorites.
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11th Mar 2021 11:36am
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11th Mar 2021 6:32pm
Well done. "Ripping God outta your head and replacing him with me" was a favorite line and a strong image!
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17th Mar 2021 1:16am
Oh my F#@#ing god this write is F---ing crazy good.
This extraordinary write literally stirs up all of my past lustful demons ripe for an orgy.
Please forgive me for my bizarre reaction/ interpretation, but It is only my feeble mind hard at work.
And I simply cannot not be held responsible for my off the wall comments, lol.
The emotional and cerebral depth of this poem speaks with incredible passion to the very core of my twisted mind.
I cannot believe that I almost used the F-word for the first time after the countless comments left in countless threads,
because I simply lost my Fucking mind immersed in this Insanely mesmerizing poem.
Awesome Mind F#@K!!!
This extraordinary write literally stirs up all of my past lustful demons ripe for an orgy.
Please forgive me for my bizarre reaction/ interpretation, but It is only my feeble mind hard at work.
And I simply cannot not be held responsible for my off the wall comments, lol.
The emotional and cerebral depth of this poem speaks with incredible passion to the very core of my twisted mind.
I cannot believe that I almost used the F-word for the first time after the countless comments left in countless threads,
because I simply lost my Fucking mind immersed in this Insanely mesmerizing poem.
Awesome Mind F#@K!!!
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18th Mar 2021 5:27pm
Hahaha Well, I'm always happy to pull a good solid "Fuck" out of someone. I'm so happy you enjoyed it. I love even more that it spoke to you. That's the best part.
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21st Mar 2021 7:09am
How a lot of people plunge into life:
Busy chasing what you want
Forgotten what you need
Busy chasing what you want
Forgotten what you need
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22nd Mar 2021 00:23am
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Having just reread this poem right now I also like, for its note of seduction, these lines:
I'm ripping God outta your head
And replacing Him with Me [ie 'I'm going to make wicked man of you']
(I had recently been hearing a youtube video of 1976 song Doctor Kiss Kiss - so your lines turn the song's 'I'll make on evil woman out you' on its head.)
I'm ripping God outta your head
And replacing Him with Me [ie 'I'm going to make wicked man of you']
(I had recently been hearing a youtube video of 1976 song Doctor Kiss Kiss - so your lines turn the song's 'I'll make on evil woman out you' on its head.)
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4th Jun 2021 9:22pm
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