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Nevermore
I have put down my sword
there's nothing left to fight
my heart has healed
touched by an angel
gifted from above
and though I know
one day
that will be taken away
I fear not
for now I say
all of my anger
and all of my hate
I send them to the pits of hell
where they lay in
Nevermore
my lover for forever
we spend day after day of bliss
few know of a comfort like this
knowing that she is true
no matter the falls
we pick each other up
makes me reminisce
of all those times I spent
wishing revenge
it was a cry for help
now I say
all of my anger
and all of my hate
I send them to the pits of hell
where they lay in
Nevermore
if I should die
and no one hears from me
it’s because I’m resting
inside the heart
of a girl who holds me deep
to be wanted in such away
I have nothing left to say
only that I am happy
laying beside my
Forevermore
there's nothing left to fight
my heart has healed
touched by an angel
gifted from above
and though I know
one day
that will be taken away
I fear not
for now I say
all of my anger
and all of my hate
I send them to the pits of hell
where they lay in
Nevermore
my lover for forever
we spend day after day of bliss
few know of a comfort like this
knowing that she is true
no matter the falls
we pick each other up
makes me reminisce
of all those times I spent
wishing revenge
it was a cry for help
now I say
all of my anger
and all of my hate
I send them to the pits of hell
where they lay in
Nevermore
if I should die
and no one hears from me
it’s because I’m resting
inside the heart
of a girl who holds me deep
to be wanted in such away
I have nothing left to say
only that I am happy
laying beside my
Forevermore
Published 7th Mar 2021
Author's Note
An edit of a older poem of mine.
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Anonymous
7th Mar 2021 7:32am
Your romanticism is just beautiful to read, DC.
I felt gently guided along each line and word like you were paying respect and honour to your beloved. It's tender without being sappy and so very heartfelt. I give you the utmost respect and credit, because it's no a easy feat (to craft such a beautiful love poem) and you really made it look effortless.
I really enjoyed reading and
thank you for sharing it with us.
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
I felt gently guided along each line and word like you were paying respect and honour to your beloved. It's tender without being sappy and so very heartfelt. I give you the utmost respect and credit, because it's no a easy feat (to craft such a beautiful love poem) and you really made it look effortless.
I really enjoyed reading and
thank you for sharing it with us.
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
That's such a great comment. I would hope not to sound sappy. Imagine that would mean I came off insincere. Very happy you enjoyed my poem 😁
Anonymous
7th Mar 2021 3:29pm
Ohhh, I meant no offense by that sappy comparison.....not. at. all. Apologies, there. I was meaning it was the furthest from and very sincere.
I loved this piece, just for clarification's sake. 🙏
Much love, DC
🌹
xo
I loved this piece, just for clarification's sake. 🙏
Much love, DC
🌹
xo
8th Mar 2021 1:33am
Anonymous
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8th Mar 2021 11:49am
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9th Mar 2021 9:08am
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10th Mar 2021 7:32am
9th Mar 2021 3:52pm
A redux is always magnetic & monument; in remembrance.
Love the purity of emotions you’ve shared on the page...🔥
Love the purity of emotions you’ve shared on the page...🔥
10th Mar 2021 7:32am
16th Mar 2021 4:12pm
So romantic and beautiful. The thought that you no longer need to fight having found that perfect person to complete you who means everything. Sadly, I think you are right that few know of a comfort like that. Picking each other up, truly supporting through the hardships and the accomplishments. From that perspective it reminded me of this song. I know you talk about putting down the sword but it reminded me of this anyway. :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GZrddJPGp1I&ab_channel=SVRCINA
Wonderful song. Fighting for each other, that's how love should be. Thank you very much for the read and comment. :-)
BTW: I love music. I'll share one with you as well.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l0qWjHP1GQc
BTW: I love music. I'll share one with you as well.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l0qWjHP1GQc
17th Mar 2021 6:24pm
18th Mar 2021 5:50am
That's such a great comment. It makes me happy you enjoyed my poem. Thank you.
