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The Sun
The word would be pretentious.
Does anyone even know who you are?
There's no way this reader knows what I'm talking about.
A magazine, oh wow.
Haven't read one of those since...
Does anyone even know who you are?
There's no way this reader knows what I'm talking about.
A magazine, oh wow.
Haven't read one of those since...
Published 5th Mar 2021
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6th Mar 2021 2:52am
Dear A,
Your poem calls to mind a newspaper The Sun. Usually running false or very loosely based truth articles on one subject or another.
On a more concrete topic, I haven’t read a magazine in forever either. While I’m sure I’ve missed your intended point I did have quite a few memories of my own about mags I used to subscribe to and for the most part enjoyed. I hope you are not the rejected writer in this write because I think your writing is quite wonderful. H🌷
Your poem calls to mind a newspaper The Sun. Usually running false or very loosely based truth articles on one subject or another.
On a more concrete topic, I haven’t read a magazine in forever either. While I’m sure I’ve missed your intended point I did have quite a few memories of my own about mags I used to subscribe to and for the most part enjoyed. I hope you are not the rejected writer in this write because I think your writing is quite wonderful. H🌷
6th Mar 2021 3:31am
6th Mar 2021 3:35am
Well I am sorry about that and I’m sure you won’t be for long. You just stay resilient even if you don’t feel like it. It’s a brutally subjective business.
I wish I had better words at this moment, I don’t but I mean the ones I’ve written. You’re a terrific writer.
I wish I had better words at this moment, I don’t but I mean the ones I’ve written. You’re a terrific writer.
