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Lost Answer
At the crossroads of destinies
Mind and Soul argue everything ...
And every argument leads,
Still not finding a solution ...
But the Heart smiled silently,
In the dark lighting up
And quietly touched the Mind,
Whispering the lost answer
Mind and Soul argue everything ...
And every argument leads,
Still not finding a solution ...
But the Heart smiled silently,
In the dark lighting up
And quietly touched the Mind,
Whispering the lost answer
Author's Note
Wrote the first stanza and then added the second for a positive message but actually each can be read stand alone or together.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Lost Answer
5th Mar 2021 1:26pm
We can't read it as suggested, it is perfect in the posted arrangement. It has a great opening and closing, to freaking tight on this one Lady
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5th Mar 2021 1:33pm
I am really happy you liked the posted arrangement. :) Just trying to put out some positive vibes on a Friday morning! So I hope that succeeds. I love 'freaking tight'. Your comment definitely made me smile. 🌻🌞❤️
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5th Mar 2021 1:39pm
Great write, positivity is awesome love the good feeling vibe
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
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5th Mar 2021 1:45pm
I love giving you good vibes so I am so happy if that succeeded. Thank you for spreading so much love and light around here. 🌻🌞❤️
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5th Mar 2021 1:58pm
Yes, most, if not all, answers to our quest for reality are in our amazing and creative minds. the challenge is to stop, be still, and listen to the inner voice. As usual, a great and meaningful write, causing one to think. Hugs and peace, Oral
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5th Mar 2021 2:26pm
Your comment displays so much wisdom. That is definitely a challenge these days, there is so much noise that stopping, being still, and listening largely seems like a thing of the past so often. I am really happy you found it meaningful and I love causing one to think. :) Little Friday morning contemplation. 🌻🌞❤️
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5th Mar 2021 3:08pm
The 21st Century "Rush, Rush" life in the fast lane is a major contributor to stress, anxiety, and frustration all of which are taking a toll on our health and happiness. In a psychology class, we were assigned to go and sit in an empty room with only bare walls and no other furniture and just think for two hours. It was tough. Why? Because we were always on the "go, go" treadmill, keep moving, etc. A colleague of mine once said, "I can't face and master today's busy challenges if I don't meditate at least an hour every morning." (Sorry for rambling). Hug and peace, Oral
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5th Mar 2021 4:06pm
Well I do love your 'rambling' Oral. So ramble on... I find yoga very meditative but I should try doing some other forms. Also, cycling, hiking, and such things as well. And sometimes driving but when I really get into deep thought I tend to speed, I mean really speed. lol
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5th Mar 2021 6:24pm
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5th Mar 2021 2:49pm
Thank you so much BP, it's really great to see you and I am so happy you liked this in all of it's meanings. 🌻🌞❤️
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5th Mar 2021 4:02pm
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5th Mar 2021 4:08pm
I really should go listen to that song. :) Thank you so much for the comment BC. I wouldn't say it's all there is but love and passion is certainly the best. 🌻🌞❤️
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5th Mar 2021 4:49pm
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5th Mar 2021 4:52pm
You should read my REALLY esoteric stuff. The this girl is batshit crazy stuff. I think the picture fits. :p I am all about winning the BIG LIKEs. There should be a BIG LIKE button. ;) 🌻🌞❤️
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5th Mar 2021 5:04pm
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5th Mar 2021 5:12pm
Oh wow! Another Big like... maybe this is one is okay after all. ;) Thank you so much for the comment and compliment. FeN. I hope you are having an amazing start to the weekend... 🌻🌞❤️
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Dear Kristina, I much prefer your heart smiling and light brightening. I have had epiphanies that have had the effect you so masterfully describe. Bravissima, mon amie BD❣❣
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6th Mar 2021 2:26am
Your comments make my heart smile and your light brightens up the place too. :) Yes, epiphanies can definitely give us the lost answer, or should I say reveal the answer... Thank you so much for the lovely words. 🌻🌞❤️
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6th Mar 2021 2:12am
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6th Mar 2021 2:26am
We all have a destiny and we certainly have something to do with shaping it. :) Thank you so much for the comment Francisco. 🌻🌞❤️
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Well, there lies the problem, my heart mumbles as it whispers – and I can’t understand the answer. : )
This kind of remined me of the devil on one shoulder, and an angel on the other. Good to have a heart that can referee.
This kind of remined me of the devil on one shoulder, and an angel on the other. Good to have a heart that can referee.
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6th Mar 2021 3:10pm
My heart screams at me sometimes, maybe mumbling and whispering is better. lol What's the question? I will give you an answer but I might have to yell...
I love that! Fits so well with the negative and positive aspects. I suppose being the referee is what is wearing everyone's heart out... 🌻🌞❤️
I love that! Fits so well with the negative and positive aspects. I suppose being the referee is what is wearing everyone's heart out... 🌻🌞❤️
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6th Mar 2021 3:42pm
Great personification ... nice tight write ... I took your suggestion ... read them together ... then read them as separate ... it totally works ... bravo dear poetess ...
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6th Mar 2021 9:25pm
I really appreciate the feedback so much, I like personification ;) ... I am glad someone took my suggestion and even more so that it worked. Thank you so much for the comment. 🌻🌞❤️
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6th Mar 2021 4:17pm
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6th Mar 2021 9:23pm
I love that you found it beautifully evocative with a focused message. Thank you so much for the comment and thoughts. 🌻🌞❤️
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6th Mar 2021 9:12pm
Dear K,
I feel like a crumb today I didn’t read all the afore comments. I have no idea if I’m copy catting but...I found such a measure of comfort from your poem in the notion that should we take a beat and quiet our racing minds answers or ideas will present themselves to us. Which is so great- if only I would pay attention to that sage wisdom! I’m the worst. I spend a majority of my day worrying about problems over which I have little to no control until I either go shopping or pass out exhausted from these fruitless negative energies. There was a softness in this piece that was particularly appealing. A gentle coaxing to slow down take a breath and listen to your inner self. Lovely write! 🌷
I feel like a crumb today I didn’t read all the afore comments. I have no idea if I’m copy catting but...I found such a measure of comfort from your poem in the notion that should we take a beat and quiet our racing minds answers or ideas will present themselves to us. Which is so great- if only I would pay attention to that sage wisdom! I’m the worst. I spend a majority of my day worrying about problems over which I have little to no control until I either go shopping or pass out exhausted from these fruitless negative energies. There was a softness in this piece that was particularly appealing. A gentle coaxing to slow down take a breath and listen to your inner self. Lovely write! 🌷
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6th Mar 2021 9:43pm
Like a crumb. lol I like that. I don't think you have to worry about ever being a copy cat. Your comments are always amazingly insightful. With all the noise and chatter these days it's easy to not hear that inner voice, or any voice. I can certainly identify with the worrying and anxiety but for the most part I don't like shopping, I gravitate to exercise to try and quiet things. :) I do love that you felt a softness and heard the message to slow down, take a breath, and listen to yourself, to nature, and all of the other things around we so often ignore instead listening to chaos, noise, and strife. 🌻🌞❤️
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6th Mar 2021 11:37pm
our destiny is set the day we come in this world as we like to thank we decide so take the road we feel is the right one
nice work be safe enjoy your evening
nice work be safe enjoy your evening
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7th Mar 2021 00:32am
Hey NB, I really appreciate you reading and sharing your thoughts with me. Thank you so much for the comment, it's great to see you here. :) 🌻🌞❤️ You be safe too and I hope you are having a great weekend so far.
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7th Mar 2021 10:25pm
Beautiful Kris. I read as a whole seeing that's how one would start. I tried to read separate but it didn't work as well. The 1st stanza I feel can stand alone amazingly, yes leaving it in a negative place but that's okay well for me. I'm not sure how I would feel about picking up just on the 2nd stanza, I will never know because the first one is there. All together just perfect.
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7th Mar 2021 11:08pm
I agree the first stands alone better than the second, possibly with a slight change it would work better too. Still, I am really glad you thought all together was perfect. Let's go with that. ;) 🌻🌞❤️ Thank you so much for the comment and giving me your thoughts. I appreciate it so much.
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8th Mar 2021 4:11am
It's a constant struggle between those two, eventually the answers are within, we just have to let our conscious mind hear it.
Nicely done Kristina.
Nicely done Kristina.
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8th Mar 2021 12:50pm
I was trying to capture that struggle a little bit in this one. :) We can find the answer most of the time if we just stop and listen. These days it seems like it is harder and harder for the conscious to hear. I am really happy you liked it. 🌻🌞❤️