bond.

....a sonic boom is heard with every thrash of your pen as it strokes against paper with this sensual erotic write.
Your seductive cadence and rhythm with each captivating verse is striking.
Susan on behalf of DUP we surrender to your enticing poetry.
There is so much power and imagination in this submission...''Nothing
will ever compare,            
Their unequivocal  
bond—

Two, forever paired.
Perfect together because through all of his dominance she is his kryptonite, so who really has the power???????????
Perfect Nightcap of poetry for me!!!
Now I will go Beat myself, hahahaha.. j/k
Fantastic Write!

It's been a while since I went full on 'explicit warning needed'... lmao. I felt the urge and just thought I would write a quick poem for the Erotic Underground thread but once I started writing, it kinda grew into this... not sure how I feel about it, but here it is... hahaha. Your comments are exceedingly kind, my lovely friend. I thank you for such thoughtfulness, the list add and just making my night...I truly appreciate it.

Remember, not too much beating, you need that eyesight... Har Har Har...
(silly Blue!)
Much love and giggles 🤭
🌹
xo
Susan

If your bond then the sex will be great and orgasmic.  Keep on writing.

Thank you for reading and your comments, Francisco... one can only hope, right?... lol.
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Fucking hell. CONGRATULATIONS  you made a paralyzed man twitch. My dear that was the hottest piece of your work I've ever read. You need to read this aloud as your next spoken piece
Loved it, love your work. Go Girl
Love and light
Ron x

heh heh... I really giggled at your "Fucking hell.".. That made my morning! Yess!!! Surprise!! 😈 It's been awhile since I delved back into my naughty origins, me thinks maybe my erotic poetry can still elicit some sort of emotion?!?!? I was wondering, until I read your ahhmazing reply and that's all I needed to rest assured. Your thoughts are very valuable and I was excited to see your excitement. Maybe doing audio is what I'll do this weekend??
I thank you from the bottom of my heart for the lovely comments, the list add and being as fucking dirty as I am from time to time. Sex and desire is part of all of us, ( only varying in degrees and preferred tastes) and it's nice to feel that lusciousness flow... (yes, pun intended!!)
Much love from across the pond,
🌹
xo

Damn! That's a fine way to wake me up! Loved it all. Had to linger at the following beautiful lines.
Gentle lashes,          
she's on the edge of sin,                      
it's not pain that fuels her          
it's giving in.

Hey there, LV
I'm glad you enjoyed my little wake up call ;)
Thank you for the shout out of those particular lines (my favorites too, btw!! Yum.) I appreciate your thoughtful remarks and enjoyed seeing you
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
-B

Now I'm awake!

"Total power exchange is about trust not abuse"   --true true true

Beautiful ink. This one's a keeper.
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Ty, lovely KP.
I'm appreciative of the list add and I'm all smiles that you're 'keeping me'...
Cheers to a motivated morning wake up!! 😈

🙏 🌹
xo

Amazing! Thanks for allowing me to get UP because of this amazing poem, Your skills are admired and desired....WOW. Hugs, kisses, and peace to Princess Blue. Peace, Oral

Good morning, O
It's a brighter day already after reading your thoughts. I appreciate you stopping by to read and for taking the time to comment. Yours is a voice I'm always interested in hearing from. So glad you enjoyed reading... ;)  
You're always welcomed here.
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xo

OMFG!!
Spills like this always draw me back to my past with my 1st Fiancee.
who was my 1st Domme and the High Priestess of my coven and of
(maybe) of our 1st communion!!

i've never been able to describe our heat and passion and internal and external EVERYTHING

but this comes very close!!

Awww... a lovely memory of your past, my friend 🙏 I'm happy to have helped elicit that flash of the past and I hope it was more sweet than bitter
I thank you for reading, your unbelievably kind and open thoughts, the generosity of your list add and all that you bring to make me feel lighter, bright and with a scintilla more peace... it's so very much appreciated.

Much love and all my best thoughts and peaceful vibes, your way... ✨
🌹
xo

Beyond goodness

Mmmm... Ty Tim
;)
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WOW!! OMG!! How can you keep moving beyond perfection, which you have done in this poem? Also, love your companion in the photo, how lucky to be that close to you. Hugs, kisses, and peace. Oral

lol... You're very kind, my lovely friend.
That's my best doggo friend, Sailor
He's a Doberman Rottweiler mix and the sweetest boy. He loves me, like story book love... hahaha 😂
I appreciate you reading (again) and your extremely thoughtful kind words
🌹
xo

Some things are worth reading a second time, maybe a third. xo, peace, oral

😈.. lol... agreed!!
;)

This is a simply beautiful depiction of sensation play blue. You have captured the trust, the anticipation, and the causal effects of the blindfold near perfectly in my opinion

Well done blue ..... BRAVISIMO

Hey there Swagger ;)  
It's such a pleasure seeing you! I REALLY enjoyed reading your thoughtful remarks. To me, your opinions are a delicious seal of approval. It's so lovely to have you visit my page, I've missed you and I hope all is well with you and yours, my friend. ✨ Thank you for the generous list add. My heart soars that you enjoyed reading and found it's authenticity  
Please, don't be a stranger... 🙏  
🌹  
xo  
-Blue

Dear, Lady Blue,
This is a pure epicurean delight and an education for this fetish-naive poet. This is such a beautifully worded description of the ejaculation of thinking, "...as thoughts plume…"
The titillating power in this passage evokes delicious desire, "charging pure, raw sexual, electrified air."      
First BDSM lesson, " O' those protruding marks of care" to ascribe compassion to a seeming cruel act gives me an intimate glimpse into the psyche of a sub.
I love the cadence in this passage, "Darkness is my sanctuary,              
temple, tomb and cemetery.              
Blindness puts my mind at ease," this feeds my passion for sexual mystery.
That I am enthralled by this passage is obvious, "tart cherry lips"
The same with this breathtaking passage, "my wetness glistens, so hungrily apparent"
Second BDSM lesson, "Total power exchange is about trust not abuse"  
I love the double entendre of this passage "she spirals deep to sub space"
This passage elevates this intimate encounter to the spiritual.  "Ohhh to revel in that sacred place"
A Last-of-the-boomers logophile bonus,  I learned a new compound word, galiant.
Bravissima, sweet S❣❣🌹

My lovely BB... you are so beautiful, sweet and supportive in your comments. The "ejaculation of thought" ... sooo nice!! 😉

Your interest and curiosity makes me smile and extremely happy that my words could have possibly inspired that, if even a little bit.

The italicize 'lessons' where more me just adding additional thoughts that popped up when writing that seemed to make sense in the moment. 🤷🏻‍♀️

That line about "subspace" is an actual bdsm state of being.... subspace is...
https://www.kinkly.com/definition/1201/subspace-bdsm
This site has been one of my favorite resources, at the beginning of my journey, besides friend's blogs and one on one personal conversations....
Your comments are so welcomed , kind complimentary and truly appreciated.
Much love and deep respect,
🌹
xoxo
-S

Reading the title gave me a double meaning when I first saw it, only to see how you perfectly weaved as having both meanings.
It's exciting and titillating to see these two partake in the pleasure of their roles.
I won't stop repeating myself, but you're a talented poet and writer. You always bring something electrifying to the DU table.
Bravo

Heel         
             
Under the crush of his hand          
on her black velvet panties          
Soon to fall like her original sin          
She wears only her skin          
As his handprints burn an Anasazi path          
On derriere too young for sorrow of Plath          
But remedied by the fetish of her tomorrow          
That Sylvia could not borrow          
He heals her marks with aloe to feel          
After her golden command to heel       
Her Beaujolais bottom shines       
With rosy midnight rhymes
Her cherried lips glisten with love’s delight           
            
You move me in ways beyond words my friend. Susan your tracks through time shine in the midnight of your verse.            
           
Love you always,            
John

I adore you more than words, my darling.

I'm going to come back to this one after dinner and a workout!

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Can't wait my love. My envisioning of your workout paints a lovely artwork in my mind. *wink*

XoXo
John

my butterflies dance
with each metered breath
feeling your tiger paw palm
like a hammer
of wicked justice
time freezes
as seconds back up
into seconds more
then
all at once
a redemption of response
smacks hard, delicious reality
tattooing your handprint
-ashen char into fairy skin-

as an always reminder— I'm yours.

Your response is pure ecstasy for the silver-backed gorilla in my male libido. You put into words a submission that hearkens to the kingly spirit in my erotic being. For you to be mine is the ultimate sealing of my love for you.

XoXoXo
John