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The Things We Don’t Say
The air is thick with the things we don’t say
The tension palpable
Complicated situations have tied our hearts in knots
I yearn to release the pressure but you’ll have no part
You close the valve tightly
The air thickens more
Until we’re choking on the smog
What are we doing this for?
The tension palpable
Complicated situations have tied our hearts in knots
I yearn to release the pressure but you’ll have no part
You close the valve tightly
The air thickens more
Until we’re choking on the smog
What are we doing this for?
Published 3rd Mar 2021
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3rd Mar 2021 11:30pm
perhaps the question is never gonna get answered
you summed it nice in this expression dear friend.
Welcome to DU
you summed it nice in this expression dear friend.
Welcome to DU
3rd Mar 2021 11:37pm
3rd Mar 2021 11:40pm
Great weaving of metaphors into questions, which causes one to think. Peace, oral
4th Mar 2021 00:26am
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4th Mar 2021 7:31am
Dear B,
Plain spoken honesty I do admire in poetry. I like very much the age old question you leave your reader with at the end of your write. “ What are we doing this for?” if you get a reasonable answer could you let me know?
Great write and welcome to DU.
H🌷
Plain spoken honesty I do admire in poetry. I like very much the age old question you leave your reader with at the end of your write. “ What are we doing this for?” if you get a reasonable answer could you let me know?
Great write and welcome to DU.
H🌷
4th Mar 2021 7:45am
